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 Posted: Tue Mar 24, 2009 8:45 pm
War
Misery
Peace
Happiness
Hate
Love
Epedimic
Cure
So many words
so many problems
so much weight on his shoulders.
So
little
time
to solve them.
Oxymoron, oxymoron
bring us
a
pleasant
ox;
golden horns
hooves
and soft eyes.
Strength to carry the
weight of our unpleasant
words, carry them
into the fire
(a phoenix is born)
Bring upon us
pleasant words, dear
dear
dear
ox, our good friend.
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Posted: Sat Mar 28, 2009 6:32 am
stressed I don't get it! CLUE please?
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Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 10:32 am
i think the poems about people being stressed out ^^
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Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 8:44 am
it tells me that the writer is facing alot of probelms, and needs strength and courage to move on
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Posted: Mon May 09, 2011 6:58 pm
*lol-ing at other ppl's replies*
Your poem is amazing, I love it!
War
Misery
Synonym
Peace
Happiness
Synonym
Hate
Love
Antonym
Epidemic
Cure
Antonym
Not all are problems but all are a lot of weight on someone's shoulders. I don't understand the oxymoron part but the ox is meant to lift the weight off our shoulders and bring back tranquility or good news after dumping the unpleasant words into the fire, and then they are 'reborn', hence phoenix, into pleasant words.
And this is how I perceived your poem! YAY! So fun.
Oh and I wasn't trying to explain what the Ox means, I have no clue what it means. xD
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