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PostPosted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 9:26 am


Approved by Sil

Name: Crimiel.
Age: 20.
Sex: Male.
Sexual Orientation: Bisexual. (Hetero in his mind only.)
Craft: N/A
Rank: Weyrbrat

Physical Description: A bit on the taller side, Crimiel is lean, having grown into his body well, all ganglyness from childhood gone. He's a tad pale, not having the normal tan that comes with being in the sun much. Dark brown hair and eyes, he seems to have a constant frown and crease between his eyebrows. His hair has grown long, just below his shoulders, since his first failed impression, cut halfhazardly to keep it from his eyes.

Personality: He comes off as a bit arrogant and straight-laced, though it's merely his own confidence, despite his pitfalls. He's sarcastic in his speech, more from habit than any true antagonistic feelings to those he converses with. He has few close friends rather than many dispersed throughout the Weyr and works suprising well with others, often suprising those that require him for one thing or another, expecting him to be controlling and insufferably self-important. He borderes on stubborn-pride, and while he takes little issue following orders he has trouble holding his tounge when he finds someone in the wrong, despite potential rebutal.

History: Son of a well respected bronze rider and raised in a communal atmosphere, he had very little interaction with his parents, especially his mother. Despite this he still looks up to his father and closely watches the dragon riders acheivements.

He entered his first hatching at age 15, going in with high expectations by not only himself but others to impress. Confident he'd impress a bronze or a respectful brown.
His confidence recieved a hard blow as he failed to impress, humbling him slightly. Rather than dwell on the failed impressing he pulled himself from the post-failed impression depression, telling himself and other werybrats his dragon had simply not been within that specific clutch.

Since, he has been in multiple hutchings, each time rejected by the young clutchlings and not every time comming off the sands unharmed - a scar now running down his right leg from an over-eager brown attempting to reach his rider.

Because of his failed impression attempts he's often whispered about amoung the other weyr brats, many bordering on cruel in their comments, and subjected to pitying looks from Riders that he previously grew up with. In which he retaliated with a cold front, acting the arrogant weyrbrat, ssucceding in only furthering the dislike of others towards him.

Still he continues to enter hatchings, a small part of him hopeful to find the other half of his soul. Though it's seen more as an inability to move on by others.

Pets: He has a brown firelizard named Toad, who's quite literally always stuck by his side. He's most often found with his tail wrapped securly around Crimiels' neck, the rest of him tangled within his hair. Durring hatchings Crimiel stands for Toad can be quite obnoxious, flittering about and jerking towards and then away from Crimiel. Often recieving snaps from the Gold sitting. The odd, twittery habbits picked up after the first hatching Crimiel had been harmed in.
(Crimiel is currently being RP'd as though he's had Toad for a while. I'd like to do a RP (set in the past) as to how Crimiel came to impressing Toad.)

Other/Talents: None to speak of. Has dabbed a bit in weaving, but is far from great at it.

Will this character be a candidate?: Yes

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Art&Character (c) Golanth
PostPosted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 10:05 am


I don't know if you missed it, but we aren't having any characters of high ranking parents at the moment, so his father couldn't be a Wingleader. sad

And at twenty-two Turns, he's too old to be a Candidate.

Teh_Sil


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PostPosted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 10:13 am


I didnt. I just typed it up before it was answered and was planning on changing it depending on the answer. x]
I'll bump him down some turns then, as well~

[Edit] I've changed it to just a random bronze rider and knocked off two turns~
PostPosted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 3:20 pm


Hmm... The changes are good so far. I'd like you to give him a little bit more in the personality section- as it stands, his personality wouldn't really lend itself to Impressing a dragon.

And in the history, you might want to go into why he kept standing if he came to dread Hatchings. Candidates are never forced to stand- did he do it because his father expected to? Because he still harbored hopes? To prove everyone wrong? Things like that. ^^

Teh_Sil


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PostPosted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 5:29 pm


Revisesd again~ x]
PostPosted: Mon Mar 23, 2009 3:12 pm


He looks good now. biggrin Sorry I'm being so picky. It just makes it easier to eventually match up Candidates to dragons when I have a bit more to go on. *nods*

Teh_Sil


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PostPosted: Mon Mar 23, 2009 4:52 pm


No, no, I understand. xD And I'd rather have the character go through various revisions than be only tentativly accepted. Thank you <3
& I hope it's not minded that I changed his name, more than slightly~ /felt the name was a tad out of place/
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