Stupid Tonberries
One of the first things I can tell you is that the black you put on with the computer is MUCH to dark with the lines, try either darkening the lines or lightening the black spaces up. Another thing with the black spaces is that they have random light spots like you missed a spot.
Another thing is that you should try to make all of the lines smoother. For example, around the panels, try using a ruler and make it one line instead of a bunch of little ones.
^ both of those should give you a cleaner look.
After you clean it up a bit, it should be really good.
biggrin Thank you, I appreciate you comments. And the funny thing is, I did you a ruler for the panels XD. They just came out that way... And I was thinking that too about the blacks and stuff...
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