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ChiRubian
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 10, 2009 1:47 pm


I've finally begun developing my own style based on my previous experiences and rhyming technique. Enjoy!

Bouncing up and off the walls
running all around
Yelling, screaming down the halls
and jumping on the ground
You ask me why I ask you what
I love the taste of life
I'm not always this happy but
today I'm free from strife

Double digit second chances
make me feel uneasy
Backstabbing and awkward glances
why you gotta be so sleazy?
Well then I'm not your friend no more
get up and get outta my face
I'm done fighting this useless war
'cause you're just empty space
PostPosted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 2:40 am


I love the last two lines.

"I'm done fighting this useless war
'cause you're just empty space"

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