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lacus889
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 7:07 pm


Desire,Thought,Dream

As you look up in the sky, do you ever wonder where it leads?
Think of other things from truth and logic, no science can emerge from where the pool of light heavenous blue runs on.
Should you of all people wonder? If wondering were a desire, should all people consider the thoughts of those immortal? Could not should not dream that even the closest of heaven come through. Wondering is an ease, dreaming is a step, thinking is a rule, loving is a fact, but not just wondering nor dreaming nor thought can endure the real truth of what is up, should you look up in the fact that what you may see in truth is no desire, for what consider desire is of no rule entirely but faith and ease that lure the weak and the strong minds towards the fact of true power and desire. Love thy mortal wims and cause, fear thy immortal faith and construct the ladder to what home awaits if thou shalt wear away true thoughts and cause, no order nor no plead can make what soul and heart come forth the blue world. Soul, and yet body unite for one reaon. For the wonder of living is fact that there is such a dream, a desire, a thought, a cause, an answer. An answer of which all should know truths and facts from logic and the untrue. Living yet breathing is nothing compared to what lies above us, above us all in depth and great holy mercy that in this world today you should know. Know why you live.
 
PostPosted: Fri Apr 24, 2009 10:58 pm


So great! I love the flow heart

Soda Dreamer -xoxo


lacus889
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 3:30 pm


thanks ^^ i was tired when i wrote that poem lol, so yeah i was so in the mood xp
PostPosted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 6:26 pm


Wow. . . that . . . was . . . BEAUTIFUL!!!! X3 I love the way your whole poem flows, and you choice of words adds a lot of power to your poem. I also love the way your poem left me inspired. ^^


~Yuna~

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lacus889
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PostPosted: Fri May 01, 2009 8:34 pm


Yuna-chan2006211
Wow. . . that . . . was . . . BEAUTIFUL!!!! X3 I love the way your whole poem flows, and you choice of words adds a lot of power to your poem. I also love the way your poem left me inspired. ^^


~Yuna~


thanks so much Miss Yuna ! ^^ these things dont come easily to me as they used to anymore lol
so it means a lot ^^ i am very glad it left u inspired!
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