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Riyinn

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 6:11 am


Approved by Leikkun

Name: Riyinn (pronouned Ryan)
Age: 16
Sex: Female (straight tho that may change if needed)
Craft: N/A
Rank: Candidate

Physical Description:
Hair: Brownish Red - Short trimmed hair as she feels longer hair gets in the way more often.
Eyes: Blue

Height: 5'2

Build: Slim, light weight, but able to get around tough areas

Personality:
A bit on the wild side Riyinn loves to explore, shes not a big cooker or cleaner and her favorite pass time is hanging with Kir exploring some area around the hold.

Shes relatively shy keeping to her self more around people then animals, and feels more at home in the wild.

She is quick to want to help and has no worry's about offering her parents or older brother help when ever she feels they need it.

Shes a bit over confident as are alot of children at her age, and judges others actions a bit more then she should.

Shes a graceful dancer but shy about it so often keeps it to her self and Kir, along with her parents and older brother. Unable to keep much of a note in singing she gives that part to Kir, and often hums a tune in her head as she dances.

History:
Most of her life she was around a small hold located somewhere off from the ista hold, she lives with her mom, dad, and older brother along with a few relatives, her family was never one to have many children tho they had tried the two they got made them happy.

She spent most her early life looking up to her big brother as much as possible taking on chores that most her age wouldn't. Most of her life is surrounded with get up, work, explore, sleep. and has been since she was old enough to work some of the more heavy tools.

She found Kir a bit over age 14, she was located along a cliff on one of the many beeches dancing to a tone only she could hear. There had been news of a good crop that year.

She was full of life and joy, and didn't see the brush that formed in front of her and took a full head over heels tumble. She must have hit her head hard with the fall, and dozed off, she awoke many hours later to the sun lowering in the sky. Dusting off and getting up she had surveyed her area, only to see something. It was dusty and dirt caked it in places but the rest of the surface was warm and smooth.

Taking her "clump of dirt" home she washed off the packed dirt to her joy it was a egg one she had seen in the few books her father had. Caring for the egg and only a short time later then egg hatched, a brown, the way it was carelessly tossed away she figured was a green the poor little fella. Feeding him and caring for him she quickly formed a bound with him very fast she found even if he couldn't talk back he was one of the best listener.

Having not grown up with many children her age she has the tendency to just leave them be watching them rather then joining in at gatherings or trades her father took the family to.

Over the years she gathered many scars markings of her travels around the hold but nothing of huge importance, like most females she was graced with well grace and could dance as well as the next she often danced along the shore Kir chitterings and rolling above her. But being shy that's as far as it went unless her parents asked her to dance for them, but it was during one of these family party's where a large dragon's wings darkened the sky and it all started.

Pets: Firelizard brown (kir = kirth -th cant be used by flits)
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Other/Talents: She values her dancing tho shes never danced in front of others besides family

Will this character be a candidate? Yes

Picture: lol maybe later xD
PostPosted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 12:54 pm


You list dancing as one of her talents, but you don't really explain it in her history or her personality, so I'd like to see that expanded upon, please. And how did she gain Kir?

Teh_Sil


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PostPosted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 5:54 am


Teh_Sil
You list dancing as one of her talents, but you don't really explain it in her history or her personality, so I'd like to see that expanded upon, please. And how did she gain Kir?
:p also its not totally finished i should put that in the title huh D:

i actually wanted to explain the whole with the firelizard in her history :p

Edited: i think most of its finished now :p
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