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 Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 2:16 am
Finally! After 3 months of on-and-off work, I've finally completed the first unofficial comic based on this 'Kingdom Hearts' RP. Sure it's far from the high school drama stuff, this is the main bits and pieces of the demon swordsmaster Forza Orion, my main rp character.
There are 33 pages in total, black and white (actually mostly grey, but hoping no one's complaining) along with red as the bloody color.
You're allowed to say anything you want, if you're confused, or you want to critique, or just felt like putting in a word, I don't mind - it won't ruin the flow.
If you're not the type who enjoys the sight of blood or limbs being chopped off, then I suggest you look away.
YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!
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Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 2:18 am
~ Pages 01 - 04 ~  Slash, slash, slash... and a foot appears  13 year old Forza Orion aka 'the Demon King' - also the title page!  The Heartless appear...  ... and disappear under Orion's command, killing everyone in sight. I forgot to mention, can you tell me how fast these pics load up on your computer? I want to make sure it doesn't take too long. I have the 'Photoshop' program that'll allow me to reduce loading times with the sacrifice of quality. Though you probably won't care about that... xp
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Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 2:24 am
~ Pages 05 - 08 ~  A villager decides to attack...  ... but Orion's Rapid Strike takes him down, without even turning his whole body around.  A rain of blood appears, and someone else is speaking  Members of the Organization XIII - who are they? I'll get more pages up later... when I got the time...
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Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 5:54 pm
Alot of Blood. And are the O13 members Axel, Marluxia, and... either Zexion or Xemnas. I think it's good. I'm interested in more.
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NarutoHinataLover88 Captain
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Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 7:13 pm
Well, of course there's gonna be more... as if that's an ending!
I didn't intentionally draw all that 'red' in the beginning but since I started it on the first page, I thought I should stick to it, and go on til the end...
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Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 8:46 pm
~ Pages 09 - 12 ~  The main men behind Orion's reign of terror revealed - Xemnas, Axel and Marluxia!  Orion overlooking his Heartless Army  A flashback begins... to 10-year-old Orion...  Who's the little girl? And what did she give him? More still coming up!
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Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 8:52 pm
~ Pages 13 - 16 ~  Back to the present... and still at war...  Another flashback, this time, the surrogate mother...  Lost in memory, almost forgot what he was suppose to do, until...  ... his Lotus Flower slashed them all down. Gruesome, isn't it? xp
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Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 10:02 pm
~ Pages 17 - 20 ~  Raining blood again, and another flashback...  8-year-old Orion bullied after trying to protect a friend...  However, the incident changes Orion forever...  Orion reminisces his past and someone appears... I wonder if anyone noticed Orion's hair...
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Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 10:05 pm
~ Pages 21 - 23 ~  Marluxia appears...  ...with a final order for the King...  Another army against the Demon King's wrath... It's getting darker and darker, huh...
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Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 11:13 am
Oh My Gosh Becky! Or Lee-wa. dude I am hooked! Need more!!! MORE!!!!
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NarutoHinataLover88 Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 8:47 pm
~ Pages 24 - 26 ~  ... who have caught him in chains!  They beat the crap out of him for answers...  That's a rod that electricutes people, if you wanted to know... Oh no...
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Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 8:51 pm
~ Pages 27 - 29 ~  Lucifer's first appearance!  I don't like this chain breaking bit - it looks weak...  ... and they're dead... Imagine the janitor's job for that massacre... xp
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Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 8:59 pm
~ Pages 30 - 33 (end) ~  Orion's main sword broken, and his friend's husband's katana that seals away Lucifer's power... I don't think I got into that much... could there be a sequel to this...?  Orion's a hannibal now... (joke)  This was the scene where Orion was captured to bring Lucifer back out... and was succeeded... from the left, Nova, Zalex and Kikyo (don't know why, I just did...)  Forgot to put some space for the word, so it ended up being done digitally... And that's the last of it! If there's any request of a certain scene or you want one of your characters' background into visual, PM me about it and we'll discuss!
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Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 9:02 pm
That part was funny. But Im confused. Say What Again?
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NarutoHinataLover88 Captain
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Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 9:04 pm
Which part? None of them seem funny to me...
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