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Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 4:41 pm
SUPER SMAAASH....!
Just kidding. XD
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Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 4:42 pm
PART I. PHYSICAL
Full name:: Josslyn, Joss for short. Reasons for the name(s):: Her mother hadn't given much thought to choosing a name, and chose one at random. Sex:: Female Apparent Age/Approximate Age:: Appears in her mid-twenties, however, she was born sixty-four years after the massacres, shortly after Lysius gained a council position, but before Satou was thought to have died. If he/she was alive during the massacres, was he/she bonded? To whom? N/A Rank:: Sargtlin If a Daewl, what is his/her one power?:: N/A Skin Tone/Apparent Race:: Tanned, and despite her hair color, her features appear more like a native americans, with a wide full mouth, high cheekbones, and arched nose and eyebrows. Height:: 5'7" Weight/Body Build:: Joss is a lot more stocky than her sister Colby, and much more muscular, but not manly. Stronger. Not too tall, not too short, both girls are now 5'7". Hair:: Josslyn's blood-red/merlot hair is quite long, the sleek, straight hair in a style similar to this one. Eyes:: Her eyes are a silver grey/blue color, like slate. Ear colours/markings:: The right tip of her ears should have silvery grey/blue markings, the left blood-red/merlot. Most of her ears should be black. Tail colours/markings:: Her should be a streaked mix of blacks, reds, and silvery grey blue. Peculiar Physical Traits:: Her ears, tail, and horn are about half the size of most Jivvins'. Distinguishing Marks:: None, especially. Other than a near-identical twin running around the village. Health:: Very healthy while growing up; loved to run and explore things when she could. Rain or shine, it didn't matter to her, she explored it the same nonetheless - she never really seemed to get sick. Or rather, if she did, it never seemed to bother her. Senses:: Her main two senses that are strong are her sight and hearing. Her sight for the simple fact that she keeps alert while on patrol, and her hearing for the sounds while on patrol. Her sense of taste is a bit dull, as she is no coneisseur, and she can smell a bit more than most, but her two dominating senses are sight and sound. Voice:: Soft-spoken, strangely enough, though if she feels she wants to be heard her voice will get -loud-. Mannerisms:: Usually seen with a slight frown, though her 'slight frown' is more of a stoic/thoughtful face for her. She raises an eyebrow whenever she finds something particularily funny, and the corner of her lips turns upward as well. She might even snort sometimes, along with the other ticks. Joss also carries herself with her shoulders back, hardly ever hunched, always keeping her body balanced. Clothes/shoes/accessories:: Josslyn, of course, always wears pants, and of rougher fabrics, that can take the beating she gives them on daily basis. Not nearly as clean cut and "crisp" as her sister, Joss doesn't pay much attention to what her clothing looks like. As long as it doesn't get in the way of her movements, she doesn't really care. s**t-kicker boots, a tight, worn t-shirt, some pants, and she's good to go. Joss can usually be seen with a weapon or two on her as well. Just in case. (Most likely a pair of daggers, which are easy to handle as well as hide.)
Joss is a brawler, and should probably have bandaged or wrapped fists, and a few cuts that have been "lovingly" cared for by Cole. Eating habits/mannerisms/tastes:: Josslyn likes her meat medium-rare; well enough to pass health standard codes, yet still bloody enough to taste the raw flavor that was originally there. Very rarely does she ever indulge in sweets, as she is not particularily fond of sugar, but she does like a dessert if it is mildly sweet.
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Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 4:43 pm
PART II. GENERAL
Occupation/Social Status in Rank:: Patrol, holds it in high honor and is very alert. Gets really into patrolling and makes sure to look for every detail. Views on Rank responsibilites:: Feels responsible and proud for upholding her given responsibilities. Education/Intelligence:: Joss never really took to learning anything extensively; she much rather preferred to brawl with the few classmates that they had, just to see if she could best them. Though she did fill out a bit later, becoming more respectable and looking for fights less. Marital Status:: Unmated, though not really looking. Political Thoughts/ Views of Ranks and Vhaid:: Is respectful, now that she's older, and holds her opinions about them to herself. Beliefs/ Values/ Strength of Beliefs:: Josslyn hates to see things to to waste; she believes that most all things have a purpose. Kill only if you need the meat, and save the rest for other uses. Use all of what you are able to of something, discarding very little. What is his/her usual disposition?:: Josslyn expects things to be done when she wants them done, usually asking in a polite manner. It used to be that she'd beat you up if you didn't agree, but as she got older, she became more laid back. She now gives a lazy smile to those that don't do what she asks, giving them a second chance, usually asking them, "Are you SURE?" She won't usually ask something of someone if she can't do it herself, but she's come to realize that there's things she can't do that others can. Optimist/ Pessimist? :: In between. It differs on the situation, but she'll speak aloud what is good and bad about a particular situation. Confident/Self-conscious? :: Very confident. How does he/she feel about his/her appearance? :: Josslyn doesn't really care, just as she doesn't care about how she dresses, either. Though she attempts to 'tidy herself up' now and again for Cole's sake. Most important possession:: ??? Talents :: Can fight pretty well with daggers (dual-wielding daggers?), but is better with her fists. Pretty agile, as well. What is a normal day like for this Jivvin?:: Josslyn usually wakes up grumpy and most times on the wrong side of the bed, though fresh air will put her into a better mood. She wakes up her sister before she heads out for her usual morning jog before patrol, and takes a break about noon to have lunch with Cole before heading back out again on patrol. At night she usually goes to visit Cole, sometimes acting as the Bouncer if the need arises for it. Once that's all taken care of, she goes back home and relaxes, ( reads? - are Wilds allowed books? ) until she falls asleep. What is a normal rainy day like for this Jivvin?:: Pretty much the same, though a bit dampening. Joss doesn't much appreciate the rain, having to patrol in it, though there are some things that rain brings out that sun does not, so she will work in it without complaint. Greatest Fear:: Having something happen to Cole, or losing the closeness, and/or losing sight/losing an eye, losing her ability to patrol. What does he/she want most?:: To always be close to her sister, and children.
Major Goals::
+ To find a mate to spend the rest of her life with + To have children
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Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 4:44 pm
PART III. RELATIONSHIPS
Significant Other/Relationship:: N/A at this time Who does he/she live with?:: Cole Who does he/she spend the most time with?:: Cole, and during childhood, her mother. Father/Relationship with him/Rank/Current Status:: Abel / Abel and Josslyn don't talk much, except for random chitchat at the bar when Josslyn goes to visit Cole. He wasn't active in her childhood or growing up, and including the dislike towards him from her mother, results in her continued distance. / Olplyn / Alive Mother/Relationship with her/Rank/Current Status:: Korin / An outstanding patroller, her mother and father had a brief, thrilling affair which quickly turned sour just after an egg resulted from their union. The egg took an entire year to hatch, so by the time it did, Korin had lost her want for Abel's offspring. Although, the patroller is proud of Josslyn's abilities on patrol, happy for the fact that her Sargtlin daughter followed in her footsteps. Josslyn has always admired her mother, though frowned on her inability to understand or want any interactions with her sister, Cole -- though this particular subject has not been brought up. / Sargtlin / Alive Siblings/Ranks/Current Status:: Cole is the only sibling that she knows of, and is her twin of the same egg. Near identical in appearance, none confuse the two, for their personalities, rank, and clothing choice are opposites. / Olplyn / Alive and living with Josslyn. Best Friend/Rank/Current Status:: Her sister is her best friend / Olplyn / Runs the Game House. Feelings toward animals:: Josslyn doesn't mind them, though she doesn't think of them as pets, either. Most animals that she catches she uses most of what she can. She finds rabbits intriguing. How does he/she view his/her family?:: The Sargtlin would do anything for her sister, Cole, as she is the closest to her. Her mother, Korin, comes second (also family). How does he/she view his/her friends?:: Josslyn never really made friends, as she's always had Cole, though she does have a few aquaintences that she talks to fairly regular. How does his/her family view him/her?:: Her mother is fairly proud of her, due to her rank and profession. Her father she talks to rarely. How does his/her friends view them?:: Josslyn doesn't have many friends, but she feels that Cole is proud for her being able to Patrol. Who is his/her hero?:: Joss admires one of the lead Patrols, Margo, deeply, due to her dedication to her job.
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Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 4:45 pm
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Posted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 3:38 pm
Sorry for the delay, Kanth m'dear. I have a few things I'd like to address.
Firstly, her occupation. You've listed her as a 'patroler'. That's basically a given. All Sargtlin wilds, unless they have a damn good reason not to, are expected to do their share of patroling. They are also, unless they are an officer, expected to have a job that they attend to when not patroling. As Joss's quick-temper would likely prevent her from officer-status, I'd like to see you assign her another job.
Continuing with patroling, in your walk-through of her day, you seem to treat patroling as brief trips of a few hours. That's fine. However, something like that would be construed more as "guard duty" than as patroling. That's definitely an important part of the Sargtlins' duties, so I'm not going to dispute that, I just want to make it clear that most true patrols run from a full day to a full two weeks, depending on the goal and distance. Being part of the near-guard would further dictate the need for a side occupation, as those positions rotate out much more frequently.
Backing up a bit, political thoughts; just because she holds them to herself, doesn't mean you can just not include them in the form. The form isn't necessarily what everyone knows about her, but what -you-, the player, know about her, and an insight into her actions and thoughts. Please rewrite this section with a little more insight.
You didn't put anything for 'most important possession'. Not a big deal, but if she doesn't have one, just say 'She's not a very material person' or something.
Another minor thing--for her goals, you list 'to find a mate and have children', but under 'marital status' you say 'unmated, but not really looking'. I guess this could make sense, but given her age, if that's a big goal of hers, you'd think it would start to be a forefront xD Just had me quirking a brow.
And, lastly, I can understand Joss's admiration of Margo, but wanted to point out that Margo is a Lieutenant, not a Captain, so she's not too too up there. Doesn't really change anything xD Just a note.
Mostly minor changes, but address these for me and you should be all set <3
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Posted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 2:31 am
Okay! I'll be sure to fix those in a bit.
The one thing I was really lost on was the actual politics - I didn't see it on the main Jivvin page unless I missed something? Which is likely, as I haven't been able to really really dissect/read through it yet if you added anything, but I just wanted to make sure I got it right before I entered it in.
Also, would the side occupation work if I put for that that she was the bouncer for Cole?
Thank you for the info on fixing. heart
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Posted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 1:03 pm
I think the 'politics' section really refers to how she feels about various council-members as well as rank relations. There aren't actual 'political parties'.
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Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 5:39 pm
What Indu said <3 We're looking for her opinions of Council members, thoughts on how things are run, thoughts on rank interactions, that sort of thing. You don't have to go into any great depth, but I feel like she must have some thoughts on something.
Being a bouncer for Cole would be fine, yes.
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Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 6:38 am
*roddik starts the 'live life day to day' political party, while Bay sits back and plans a dictatorship*
No... parties wouldn't really work all that well here XD
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