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PostPosted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 4:36 pm


Approved by Teh_Sil


I hope I'm doing this right...


Name: Illyria
Age: 15
Sex: Female
Craft: Harper
Rank: Apprentice

Physical Description: Illyria was born with one green eye, and one blue eye, a constant cause for disruption in classes. She is tall and slender, with an athletic build. Some might call her bony. Her light brown hair hangs down past her waist, even in ponytails which her hair is always found in. She often wears bulky clothes that hide her femininity even more, not as a conscious thought, simply by accident. Due to this and her slender build, she is often mistaken for a long haired boy.

Personality: Confident, Happy, Friendly, Daydreamer, Airheaded. These things describe Illyria to a tee as she is very calm and easy to get along with. Often called upon to occupy children with make-believe stories, she is very creative. She can be rather naive and childish, and is not very good at making quick decisions, especially ones that concern others. It makes her flustered and nervous. She wouldn't be able to bear it if something that she had decided hurt someone else in the end. Others might expect her to be a tomboy but outside the stable she's a proper lady, you might say. For instance, you would see her wearing a long skirt and tunic, relaxing in the grass with Lille grazing nearby, but when it came to the stable and runnerbeasts, she forgot all about propriety and threw herself wholeheartedly into caring for the animals.

History: She hails out of Ruatha Hold, her father is a Beastcrafter and provides the Hold with many great runnerbeasts. She grew up at her father's heel, helping him tend the large beasts. Shortly after her birth, her father had taken a nasty fall and was trampled under the hard hooves of a runnerbeast. The accident had left him unable to have more children, and a painful limp that made it impossible to do all of the work himself.
This fact alone was enough to make her resist a Search.
Pets: Black and white runnerbeast named Lille that she leaves behind.
Other/Talents: Is great with runnerbeasts. Has love for animals of all kinds.

Will this character be a candidate? Yes (Can I state a preference? If so, I believe she'd be more suited to a green.)

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 6:42 pm


I still have a couple of reservations about the history. It still seems a bit Sue-ish that she's so great at singing and with runners. I'd like to see you expand on it some more and go some more into it, please. <3 Also, she would not be able to bring her runner to the Weyr- nor would she have time to care for it.

Teh_Sil

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