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PostPosted: Fri Feb 27, 2009 11:55 am


slow dances universally renowned
rock his moonlit ark. between the
tangle of limbs the Celestial Mother
pushes the wrinkled old worries
tugging at girlish heartstrings.

o Mother deliver her
from the sin of the great divide
beyond her tremulous pearl legs.
the twining of fingers, gentle
hand-holding, will not save her.

(as she holds the back of his
head, her eyes go blind with
stardust.)
PostPosted: Fri Mar 13, 2009 8:34 pm


...Wow...I...I think I get it, especially because of the title, but like..It puts me in a thinking trance. In a good way though.

Lovely.

Oukow

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