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Stone Temple Creep
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 12:38 am


Good day my fellow guildians. As stated in my return announcement, I started creating stories in my abscense. I would like to share with you, some of one the stories that I started to write. This is the one that stands out the most in my mind.

Central idea

There is a very thin line between the ties of good and evil. Each side is represented by light or darkness. It is impossible to have one without the other. For as long as each has existed, they have been in constant conflict.

This is a story about a war. A war between the light and the darkness. It is designed to explore the concepts of life and death. This is about the trails of conscience and consequince.

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 12:39 am


==============Chapter 1==============

Good luck, young one...

That was the last phrase Patricia heard before being sent along on her mission. It was a comforting goodbye of sorts. She opened her eyes and found herself in a strange place she had never been to before, yet found oddly familiar. Perhaps she had infact been here before, in her previous life.

"Grain?" she silently inquired to herself, as she realised what type of landscape she was surrounded by. Grain as far as the eye could see. Her 'travels' have brought her to a prarie field. After soaking in her surroundings, she rather quickly deduced that she was left in the middle of nowhere. With only the clothes on her back and her trusty silver-plated 'parnter' strapped to her waist, the only thing she could do was sigh and move along.

Patricia was something of a mystery. Neither living nor dead, her existance was almost quite literally non-existant. Patricia was actually an angel from heaven. "Angel-in-development", as she liked to put it. When you think of a typical angel, you think about a very gentle, caring being sent from the heavens. Flowing robes, fluffy feathered wings, bright light and warmth. Patricia was anything but the typical angel. As a matter of fact, she was technically still human. A medium height, standing about 5'8" tall, weighing approximatly 120lbs, she appeared like the average 22 year old youth. Appearances are quite decieving as she was far from that, aswell.

Patricia was something of a reaper. The purpose of her after-death existance was solely to seek out and incapacitate those among us on earth who would be considered evil. Demons, devils and other sorts of nasty things that were born from the dark abyss. All the creatures that come from the one unspeakable place. In another plane of existance, where time flows so quickly, it seems to stand still compared to the real world, fires cover the land and dark beings inhabit the shadow. The realm of darkness, itself...

Hell.

Although most beings made of shadow are restricted to cross over and are bound to their own world, some manage to find their was to the surface. Some like to cower in darkness and influence the outcome of human activity, while others prefer to orchastrate as much chaos as humanly, or as inhumanly possible. In the space between light and darkness, the earth was a land cursed by a war between both sides. No one side had complete control. Neither would give up until the other perished. In a war that was impossible to win, where either side cannot exist without the other, Patricia was a foot soldier.

After almost an hours worth of inner contemplation, Patricia finally found herself on the outskirts of a civilization. "This must be it," she said to herself, aloud. Peering down on the town from a slightly raised hill, she carefully studied what was visible of the new-world city from afar. Reaching to her face, her hands gloved by white silk, she carefully pulled away the dark burgondy lensed eyewear that covered her eyes. Deep green pupils eyed the new age she would never get to know. Although the structures looked very much the same as she remembered, they were built in larger numbers. Many yards in another direction, larger, industrialised buildings lined up, one after the other. Metal spines hugged the ground as a series of connecting metal boxes moved at high speeds across them. Paved roads and automobiles were also quite foreign to her. Despite her gaze in awe, the serious expression never once left her face.

"Alright, let's go." Replacing the glasses over her deep green eyes, a single word that seemed impossible to stop repeating, acted as a reminder to her.

Revenge...

Stone Temple Creep
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Stone Temple Creep
Captain

PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 12:40 am


==============Chapter 2==============

'Where in Hell are taking me, Zee?'

Patricia mussed to herself inside among her thoughts as she looked around, reaching a downtown marketplace. Completely unaccustomed to the new world around her, everything took her by surprise. She was beginning to think all the rukus of the people living their day-to-day lives was starting to deter her from her duties. She began to think that everything around her was making it increasingly more difficult to concentrate.

"Maybe you're just too easily distracted, kiddo." an invisible voice called out to her.

"Maybe I wouldn't be so angry, if you'd just give directions," she thought to herself in responce

Knowing the voice was coming from inside her own head, the messanger was quick to retort. "If I told you how to get to your destination, you'd learn nothing along the way."

"I don't care about finding my way," she snapped back at the voice. She only had one thing on her mind. "What am I looking for, Zee?"

"What you are looking for, is the answer to all your questions."

"You really aren't helping all that much, I hope you know that." Patricia seemed rude to her gaurdian archangel who was communicating telepathically through her thoughts. Remembering that Zee was completely responcable for her to even be walking right now, she had a brief moment of remorse for her actions. "Listen, I know you brought me this far, but I don't understand why I have to keep running in circles for you."

"You're running in circles for yourself, my dear." Although she could not see him, Patricia just knew Zee was smiling. He was mocking her. "I'm just here to teach you how to stop."

"Always a riddle."

"Life's a riddle," he responded, testing her patience even further. "You had trouble through your journey in life. Now in death..."

She quickly interupted, "I have the oppurtunity to find my way now?" Finishing his sentence, it was obvious this was not the first time she had heard this.

"Precisely"

"So? What's your point?"

"All in due time, young one."

Patricia stopped at an intersection. Knowing Zee had left, she allowed an angry sigh to escape her nostrils. Peering at the little white man who stood 10 feet overhead, she joined in the rat race.
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