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 Posted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 3:58 pm
 this is one of my most resent pics that my scanner has demmed me worthy enought to upload. I'm working on coloring it both digitally and with copic. What do you think needs improvement?
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Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 8:29 pm
oops, I'm sorry.
1. her posture is crooked. she's slanting towards the left.
2. a little color would be nice. smile
3. you should also study proportions for the human body. a lot of your body parts aren't the same size, or proportional.
some examples:
a. the neck and the shoulders are too small/short.
b. hands are too small.
c. waist/torso should be larger.
d. add wrinkles and creases to the clothing/fabric.
e. the exposed part of the leg shortens out to be too thin. it seems as though the elbows are the same size as the knees.
f. ankles are too thin.
g. the head isn't....round at the top? I guess it seems as though it's...angular at the top.
4. the details on the boots are really nice, but her feet are too small.
5. I'm loving the rest of the elaborations, but always use a ruler when you need straight lines.
6. the face needs more detail, because that's the main part that I myself pay the most attention to.
can't wait to see more, pm me if you need more criticism. smile
~Alexxxxxxx
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petitefromage Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2009 2:33 pm
very good,but the face details sem a little...bland to me, try using more detail and maybe even some color and shadowing to really make the drawing...pop i guess is the word i'm looking for. the body is good...it could use a bit of work making it more realistic, but all around i say good job smile
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Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 5:15 pm
very nice but she is a bit crooked and i think thats about it. GOOD JOB!!!!!!!
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Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 6:57 pm
draw more people that you see, it helps tremendously. Read some of the other crits you will find many things helpful
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