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First, Spelling and grammer is important and is also mentioned in the guild main page. PLEASE watch your spelling and grammer. AND NO SHORT HAND. THIS IS A PROPER RP GUILD. I'm sure Charly will agree with me on this. he is the GuildMaster if you dont know.

Secondly, Detail. I know that the age differences between everyone are probably getting wider now that more people are coming in. But if you dont know about it yet please look up adjectives adverbs ad other parts of speech to add depth to your posts. "i'm happy you're here." can be improved with these to make it "i'm highly ecstatic that you have decided to visit me." Probabaly not the best example but you get the idea. "(char name) sat down" can be made "(char name) picks up a chair, turned it around so he could sit in it backwards and lean on the back of it."