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Posted: Sun Feb 15, 2009 11:31 am
Name: Nix Finnily Gender:Male Age:15 Year:5 House:Griffindor
Ethnicity: Irish Hair color: Bright Scarlet with quick flashes of brown in there. Its usually just dirt in his hair. Eye color: Emerald Green that seem to sparkle by day and glow at night.
Pet:He has a small Snowy Owl whose name is Dewey. Dewey is prone to n** at others; except people he's learned to trust.
Family life:He's lived in Ireland his entire life with his Parents Harold Finnily and Winnifred "Hen" Seford and his Brother, Seamus. His parents raised him at their Inn/Tavern in Dublin where he's met many muggles and wizarding type alike so he has learned not to be biased from the start. His mother Hen doesn't try to pay more attention to his younger brother but still does on all accounts so Nix usually feels quite distanced from his mother but developed a very strong relationship with his father.
Diving deeper:Nix is the peacemaker of the family. He's always trying to fix a problem, even if he started it himself. He often feels left out by his mum, but he loves watching sports, both Muggle football and Wizarding Quidditch, with his dad. Often on Sunday afternoons Nix and his father can be seen lounging around the house, bare footed, with their feet on the coffee table, watching whatever sport is on. There is one thing that truly peeves him, though. His younger brother Seamus. For reasons such as never leaving him alone, interrupting phone calls, and often trying to just plain annoy him outright.
Taking a closer look:
"Seamus, Nix, get up fer your mornin' breakfast!" His mother yelled from downstairs.
"Alright, mum! We're comin', already!" Nix yelled back, trying to pull on his clothes. As they worked their way down the stairs Nix thought, Finally I'm going back to Hogwarts! It feels like it's bin ages!
Again his mother, being as impatient as ever, yelled a second time, "Nix hurry up; you're goin' ta miss the train!"
Once he was downstairs his mother threw some floo powder in the fireplace, handed Nix his things, and said for him, "Platform Nine and Three Quarters!" After Nix had gone his mother turned to his brother Seamus. "Now would you like some toast, dear?" Nix landed in the platform and got out his wand, muttering a spell to clean himself off, grinning excitedly when he was finished. "Finally, Hogwarts! I'm back for another year!"
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Posted: Sun Feb 15, 2009 3:57 pm
You have Not been Accepted to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.
I don't believe that you are ready for a second character, because you need to first practice roleplaying more with your original RPC. Your posts tend to not exceed the minimum amount of required sentences and I want to see more creativity and description in EACH of your posts. Maybe once your skills are improving I will allow a second character, but for now, lets stick to one.
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