Femmunition
*Twitches eye* 0_<
It's not that bad.. besides the lyrics.
It has an annoying auto, like Lil Wayne though.
Shenco - Me too. I was like.. xD O-o D: but it fits something Fist would do.
But it
is that bad. i love music, and i hate when people think they're good- when they're garbage. usually i would offer constructive criticism or say nothing at all. BUT in this case- I would tell this kid to restart totally.
1- dont rap about gangs- when you are clearly not in one
2- get a better vocab, better lyrics
3- dont use an auto, but if YOU absolutely have to be like ******** else, do not OVERuse the auto
4- rap on beat ((this is key importance!))
5- do not have features that are weaker than you ((this is okay to feature on their s**t, and destroy them on their own track, BUT NEVER have a weak feature on your track)
6-remember you are speaking to an audience, and not just yourself
7- don't have a fathead or a superego, when you clearly... suck
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