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 Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 10:29 am
Name : The Quiet and Kind; Ayame "Kurosaki" Shiguro
Gender : Female
Age : 14
Year : Fourth
House : Ravenclaw
Ethnicity : American
Hair/Eye Color : Her hair is a dark blue colour that reaches her mid-back, it is normally tied in a low ponytail that hangs over her shoulder. Her eyes are a soft turquoise.
Pet : A small, grey kitten that loves to cuddle, named Anya. Anya was found by Ayame in Diagon Alley, she looked sick. So Ayame took it to the pet store and the shop owner explained that she didn't come from there, but would be happy to give Ayame some things to help her take care of the sickly kitten. When the kitten was healed, she never left Ayame's side.
Home Life : Nami "Kurosaki" Shiguro - Ayame's Mother. She works as a waitress at the Shiguro Family Restaurant for Witches and Wizards, run by herself and her husband Shiron Shiguro.
Shiron Shiguro - Ayame's Father. He is the head of the Shiguro Family Restaurant for Witches and Wizards that also doubles as an Inn for those weary travellers that need a place to stay.
Diving deeper : Ayame is nothing but a kind, caring girl. She seems to find the good in everyone, no matter how terrible they are or act. She is often the problem solver for arguments in her House and also helps the younger Students in other Houses if they need it. She enjoys reading and writing poetry and can often be found in the Library with a good book in hand or a piece of parchment, working on one of her masterpieces.
Taking a closer look : Ayame sat in the Library, reading one of her favourite books. This would be the...fifth time she had read this book and she still didn't seem to get tired of it. As she was just getting ready to turn the page, a sound caught her ears. It sounded like...people arguing. "Yea! Well...what do you know?!" One voice shouted. "I know plenty for your information!" Another voice shouted back. Concern filled her eyes and Ayame got up from her seat, closing the book and heading in the arguments direction. "Please. Don't argue. It's painful to see people argue with one another." She said as she reached the two students. Something in her voice must've moved them, because the two students looked at eachother sadly, apologized, and then left the Library together, laughing and talking with one another like friends should.
Pleased, Ayame went back to her seat and returned to her book, happy that she had solved something before it got too out of hand.
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Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 12:52 pm
You have been Accepted
to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.
Alot more, I felt, could have been done with this character. It would have
been nice if you better detailed her parents so we would know how Ayame
became the such a sweet girl. I did like your description of her though.
And that she likes poetry. What made me laugh a bit was that I can very
easily see other students finding Ayame's goody ways annoying and others
finding it charming. It'll be interesting to see the way this RPC gets along
with others. She also seems a bit nosy, a trait that fits her well and makes
her seem more real. She may be a goody, but its excellent that you didn't
make Ayame perfect. Can't wait to see what becomes of this one!
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