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PostPosted: Sun Feb 08, 2009 10:09 am


Here you will post why you want to join this squad and you will post a sample rp post. We want to be the most literate in the soul society so make sure you keep decent posts through out your membership here not just for your samples. You are not allowed to be active until you have been accepted once you are accepted I will ask you to add your profile to the accepted profiles.
PostPosted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 7:10 am


"I want to be accpeted in this squad because my mane life-objective is to get stronger to revenge my clan. And I don't see another clan where I could fit better than squad 11!" said Jugitso looking directly to his Captain with his big green eyes. Then he put his knee in the floor and asked "Could you please think of accpeting me? I swear I will be faithful until the last second of my life" now he was looking with dignaty and confidence to his superior expecting a answer.


((sorry if I have mistakes but I'm Portuguese...))

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 1:56 pm


Joshua Collen
"I want to be accpeted in this squad because my mane life-objective is to get stronger to revenge my clan. And I don't see another clan where I could fit better than squad 11!" said Jugitso looking directly to his Captain with his big green eyes. Then he put his knee in the floor and asked "Could you please think of accpeting me? I swear I will be faithful until the last second of my life" now he was looking with dignaty and confidence to his superior expecting a answer.


((sorry if I have mistakes but I'm Portuguese...))
not many grammatic errors main thing is I would like a longer post sample and it can be about anything from any point of view I will accept you but I hope there will be longer posts from you in the future. Please post your profile in the accepted profiles and make me proud.
PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 5:52 am


Qastor Sugino Sakada
Joshua Collen
"I want to be accpeted in this squad because my mane life-objective is to get stronger to revenge my clan. And I don't see another clan where I could fit better than squad 11!" said Jugitso looking directly to his Captain with his big green eyes. Then he put his knee in the floor and asked "Could you please think of accpeting me? I swear I will be faithful until the last second of my life" now he was looking with dignaty and confidence to his superior expecting a answer.


((sorry if I have mistakes but I'm Portuguese...))
not many grammatic errors main thing is I would like a longer post sample and it can be about anything from any point of view I will accept you but I hope there will be longer posts from you in the future. Please post your profile in the accepted profiles and make me proud.


Roger! I'll make them longer..xD

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 7:35 pm


Joshua Collen
Qastor Sugino Sakada
Joshua Collen
"I want to be accpeted in this squad because my mane life-objective is to get stronger to revenge my clan. And I don't see another clan where I could fit better than squad 11!" said Jugitso looking directly to his Captain with his big green eyes. Then he put his knee in the floor and asked "Could you please think of accpeting me? I swear I will be faithful until the last second of my life" now he was looking with dignaty and confidence to his superior expecting a answer.


((sorry if I have mistakes but I'm Portuguese...))
not many grammatic errors main thing is I would like a longer post sample and it can be about anything from any point of view I will accept you but I hope there will be longer posts from you in the future. Please post your profile in the accepted profiles and make me proud.


Roger! I'll make them longer..xD
please feel free to exceed my expectations do well and when we have the seating exam youll pass with no problems same goes for those who join after him apply yourselves and you will have no problem ranking high.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 7:42 pm



Name: Ekibyou Neppa
Skills: "I am skilled in Zanjutsu and Kidou. For speed, I am about average. As pertaining to Hakudou, I try to avoid it at all costs, but I do know Aikido if I must.."
Abilities: "My weapon is attached to a chain so I can throw it and do many other things during combat, such as tripping enemies, scaling walls, etc. I tend do use both Kidou and Zanjutsu, though the later does out weigh the previous. With practice, I'll remember some Kidou and become strong enough to fire them by only calling the name. I mainly want to use Fire based Hakudou and most any of the Bakudou that impair movement. When I reach my Shikai and Bankai, I will have a much better grasp on fire, as well as having various techniques utilizing fire to a greater degree, especially to compliment my sword style."
Why Squad 11?: "I believe I will be well suited for Squad 11 with the following: I have a strong will. Especially to win and preserve justice. I will continue to fight and become stronger as I serve out justice. A squad such as this suits me because of the amount of assignments this squad obtains that I can help burden the load from other squads, so that they may use their resources to do their normal duties instead of stopping something they shouldn't have to worry about."
RP Sample: Neppa walked down one of the various streets in the world of the living, left hand resting on the hilt of his zanpakuto, his other resting on the inside of his kosode. He was sent to a city to protect it from Hollow attacks, along with one other shinigami. They had decided to separate and watch half the city each, which he agreed with wholly. As he was walking past some ally ways he saw that there was a woman and her child being picked on by a couple of gang members. He rushed over instinctively and yelled, "Leave the woman alone!" Now being a shinigami, they couldn't hear him. But he also exerted some of his spirit force, trying to make the men leave them alone. Luckily, it worked, as they stopped, said 'Forget it', then took off. The two were unhurt and he was content, walking way with a slight smile.
Again, Neppa was walking along his route. Still no Hollow on his end nor his comrade's and he continued on his side of town. By chance, he ran into the thugs that were trying to steal from the woman before hand. He couldn't help but glare at them for their earlier acts, and ended up following them, to hopefully try and keep them from causing more harm. As it would turn out, though, they would be the next victim. His phone went off as his comrade called to notify him of a Hollow closing in on his location. The sensor on his phone relayed the same. And not a minute later, the ugly beast reared it's head around the corner.
The Hollow was appalling, cursing everything it resembled. It looked like a human and a snake, a long, pointed, fanged mask covering the face, followed by a long neck, body, and spindly arms and legs. The first thing it did was pop a fire hydrant, launching water into the air, and the metal crashing down on a car. The two thugs laughed and continued walking on.
Straight towards it.
Neppa ran passed them and pointed his fingers on his right hand out. "Byakurai!" White lightning arched forth from his fingers and hit the Hollow in the shoulder, causing it to turn and see the Shinigami, letting out a roar of glee before charging. Neppa had to think fast, if he didn't stop it soon, someone was going to get hurt, even if it was the two thugs. He drew his sword and threw it at the building to his left, striking and sticking in the wall. Next, he pulled on his chain, helping him up the wall, to where he removed the sword and jumped at the Hollow. "Die!" he yelled, passing the head only by a bit to slice off it's arm. Another roar, though this one of pain and anger, as it charged at Neppa, away from the thugs. He held his sword in both hands, pointing it at the Hollow and began to chant, "Disintegrate, you black dog of Ronda--". The swipe was quick, the Hollow lunged at Neppa, who barely dodged, scratching his chest and stopping the spell. But the Hollow was now wide open. "Final strike!"

Neppa stood there amongst the Hollow's bisected head. While it turned around, he leaped at the beast, cleaving the head in half. Neppa sheathed the sword in a traditional fashion as the corpse disintegrated, releasing the soul for further judgment, and turned around to see the thugs there standing where the cleaved head had once been. They both looked like they had just had an epiphany, or experienced something gahstly. They were both starring at Neppa, more like through him though. "Go home." He turned and walked away, continuing his rounds and updating his situation with his comrade as the two thugs turned round and returned to their own residences.





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PostPosted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 5:01 pm


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Name: Ekibyou Neppa
Skills: "I am skilled in Zanjutsu and Kidou. For speed, I am about average. As pertaining to Hakudou, I try to avoid it at all costs, but I do know Aikido if I must.."
Abilities: "My weapon is attached to a chain so I can throw it and do many other things during combat, such as tripping enemies, scaling walls, etc. I tend do use both Kidou and Zanjutsu, though the later does out weigh the previous. With practice, I'll remember some Kidou and become strong enough to fire them by only calling the name. I mainly want to use Fire based Hakudou and most any of the Bakudou that impair movement. When I reach my Shikai and Bankai, I will have a much better grasp on fire, as well as having various techniques utilizing fire to a greater degree, especially to compliment my sword style."
Why Squad 11?: "I believe I will be well suited for Squad 11 with the following: I have a strong will. Especially to win and preserve justice. I will continue to fight and become stronger as I serve out justice. A squad such as this suits me because of the amount of assignments this squad obtains that I can help burden the load from other squads, so that they may use their resources to do their normal duties instead of stopping something they shouldn't have to worry about."
RP Sample: Neppa walked down one of the various streets in the world of the living, left hand resting on the hilt of his zanpakuto, his other resting on the inside of his kosode. He was sent to a city to protect it from Hollow attacks, along with one other shinigami. They had decided to separate and watch half the city each, which he agreed with wholly. As he was walking past some ally ways he saw that there was a woman and her child being picked on by a couple of gang members. He rushed over instinctively and yelled, "Leave the woman alone!" Now being a shinigami, they couldn't hear him. But he also exerted some of his spirit force, trying to make the men leave them alone. Luckily, it worked, as they stopped, said 'Forget it', then took off. The two were unhurt and he was content, walking way with a slight smile.
Again, Neppa was walking along his route. Still no Hollow on his end nor his comrade's and he continued on his side of town. By chance, he ran into the thugs that were trying to steal from the woman before hand. He couldn't help but glare at them for their earlier acts, and ended up following them, to hopefully try and keep them from causing more harm. As it would turn out, though, they would be the next victim. His phone went off as his comrade called to notify him of a Hollow closing in on his location. The sensor on his phone relayed the same. And not a minute later, the ugly beast reared it's head around the corner.
The Hollow was appalling, cursing everything it resembled. It looked like a human and a snake, a long, pointed, fanged mask covering the face, followed by a long neck, body, and spindly arms and legs. The first thing it did was pop a fire hydrant, launching water into the air, and the metal crashing down on a car. The two thugs laughed and continued walking on.
Straight towards it.
Neppa ran passed them and pointed his fingers on his right hand out. "Byakurai!" White lightning arched forth from his fingers and hit the Hollow in the shoulder, causing it to turn and see the Shinigami, letting out a roar of glee before charging. Neppa had to think fast, if he didn't stop it soon, someone was going to get hurt, even if it was the two thugs. He drew his sword and threw it at the building to his left, striking and sticking in the wall. Next, he pulled on his chain, helping him up the wall, to where he removed the sword and jumped at the Hollow. "Die!" he yelled, passing the head only by a bit to slice off it's arm. Another roar, though this one of pain and anger, as it charged at Neppa, away from the thugs. He held his sword in both hands, pointing it at the Hollow and began to chant, "Disintegrate, you black dog of Ronda--". The swipe was quick, the Hollow lunged at Neppa, who barely dodged, scratching his chest and stopping the spell. But the Hollow was now wide open. "Final strike!"

Neppa stood there amongst the Hollow's bisected head. While it turned around, he leaped at the beast, cleaving the head in half. Neppa sheathed the sword in a traditional fashion as the corpse disintegrated, releasing the soul for further judgment, and turned around to see the thugs there standing where the cleaved head had once been. They both looked like they had just had an epiphany, or experienced something gahstly. They were both starring at Neppa, more like through him though. "Go home." He turned and walked away, continuing his rounds and updating his situation with his comrade as the two thugs turned round and returned to their own residences.





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Accepted nice long and lit. RP sample please post your profile in the accepted profiles
PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2009 3:05 pm


Red walked into the captains office and sat himself down in a chair under a spot light. his Zanpok-tos hanging on both of his hips. they were Tonfas but heck he didn't care. when red was asked why he wanted to join he simply reply from behind his modified collar. "sir, I'm a dedicated person. ill work hard, train as much as possible and ill make sure that everyone gets out of any situation alive. i also love to fight and i don't mind having to suffer the consequences. give me a chance and ill improve. lately Ive been focused on obtaining Shikai. thanks for you time. if you need me ill be waiting out side." Red finished as he got up his modified black collar shifting a little as he bowed in respect and left. when he got outside he noticed the wind was blowing the cherry blossom tree leaves around. he went and sat under the tree until he was asked to come back.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2009 4:10 pm


_Manpish_
Red walked into the captains office and sat himself down in a chair under a spot light. his Zanpok-tos hanging on both of his hips. they were Tonfas but heck he didn't care. when red was asked why he wanted to join he simply reply from behind his modified collar. "sir, I'm a dedicated person. ill work hard, train as much as possible and ill make sure that everyone gets out of any situation alive. i also love to fight and i don't mind having to suffer the consequences. give me a chance and ill improve. lately Ive been focused on obtaining Shikai. thanks for you time. if you need me ill be waiting out side." Red finished as he got up his modified black collar shifting a little as he bowed in respect and left. when he got outside he noticed the wind was blowing the cherry blossom tree leaves around. he went and sat under the tree until he was asked to come back.
I shall accept you how ever a few things please capitalize where necessary and please spell zanpakutou correctly. Other than that you are good please try to make longer more literate posts from now on but, above all you are accepted.

Please read the squad announcements and adhere to them; in other words do what they say.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2009 4:16 pm


Qastor Sugino Sakada
_Manpish_
Red walked into the captains office and sat himself down in a chair under a spot light. his Zanpok-tos hanging on both of his hips. they were Tonfas but heck he didn't care. when red was asked why he wanted to join he simply reply from behind his modified collar. "sir, I'm a dedicated person. ill work hard, train as much as possible and ill make sure that everyone gets out of any situation alive. i also love to fight and i don't mind having to suffer the consequences. give me a chance and ill improve. lately Ive been focused on obtaining Shikai. thanks for you time. if you need me ill be waiting out side." Red finished as he got up his modified black collar shifting a little as he bowed in respect and left. when he got outside he noticed the wind was blowing the cherry blossom tree leaves around. he went and sat under the tree until he was asked to come back.
I shall accept you how ever a few things please capitalize where necessary and please spell zanpakutou correctly. Other than that you are good please try to make longer more literate posts from now on but, above all you are accepted.

Please read the squad announcements and adhere to them; in other words do what they say.


o.k yes taichou. i was in another guild before and they never spelled it right so i never learned but ill remember. thanks for exepting me.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 22, 2009 4:22 pm


_Manpish_
Qastor Sugino Sakada
_Manpish_
Red walked into the captains office and sat himself down in a chair under a spot light. his Zanpok-tos hanging on both of his hips. they were Tonfas but heck he didn't care. when red was asked why he wanted to join he simply reply from behind his modified collar. "sir, I'm a dedicated person. ill work hard, train as much as possible and ill make sure that everyone gets out of any situation alive. i also love to fight and i don't mind having to suffer the consequences. give me a chance and ill improve. lately Ive been focused on obtaining Shikai. thanks for you time. if you need me ill be waiting out side." Red finished as he got up his modified black collar shifting a little as he bowed in respect and left. when he got outside he noticed the wind was blowing the cherry blossom tree leaves around. he went and sat under the tree until he was asked to come back.
I shall accept you how ever a few things please capitalize where necessary and please spell zanpakutou correctly. Other than that you are good please try to make longer more literate posts from now on but, above all you are accepted.

Please read the squad announcements and adhere to them; in other words do what they say.


o.k yes taichou. i was in another guild before and they never spelled it right so i never learned but ill remember. thanks for exepting me.
No prob just do as I tell all others to do be literate and exceed my expectations of you.
PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:50 pm


Tokuzen slowly, nervously inched himself into the captain's office. Today was the day he had to ask for the approval to join his squad. After a while, he brought his eyes up from the floor, now looking straight at the captain, who sat at his desk. He opened his mouth to speak, but no words came out. After all, he had no clue where to start. His mind began to race, not staying on one thought for longer than a second. Before he knew it, about a minute had passed, and still nothing. Unconsciously, he rested his hand on his zanpakuto, which at this point, remained nameless, seeing as he had just graduated from the shinigami academy. Suddenly, words came out, but Tokuzen had no clue they were coming out.
"Come on, Tokuzen! Say something! He's looking RIGHT at you! Ah, you probably have a stupid look on your face, don't you!? Come on, MAN UP!! I gotta say something! But...what? What am I supposed to say!? How come the academy didn't teach me this!? DAMMIT! I HATE THAT PLACE! Gah! Stay on topic! Something must be said! This is my only chance! I only get one first impression, and I can't afford to ruin it! If I screw this up, I'll never become a shinigami! .....I wonder..... if I don't become one, will I have to give my zanpakuto back-- NO! I gotta stay focused! Okay, now, I gotta ask him something!"
Unfortunately, Tokuzen was clearly thinking out loud, but was too deep in his thoughts to escape them and realize what he was doing. He was so deep in fact, that he began to do a little jig, yet another of his little quirks, and yet another quirk he was unaware of. Eventually, he stopped thinking out loud and dancing, unconsciously returning to his original pose before speaking.
"Hey...uh.....can I join this squad?"
He said with a weak smile.

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2009 5:59 pm


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Tokuzen slowly, nervously inched himself into the captain's office. Today was the day he had to ask for the approval to join his squad. After a while, he brought his eyes up from the floor, now looking straight at the captain, who sat at his desk. He opened his mouth to speak, but no words came out. After all, he had no clue where to start. His mind began to race, not staying on one thought for longer than a second. Before he knew it, about a minute had passed, and still nothing. Unconsciously, he rested his hand on his zanpakuto, which at this point, remained nameless, seeing as he had just graduated from the shinigami academy. Suddenly, words came out, but Tokuzen had no clue they were coming out.
"Come on, Tokuzen! Say something! He's looking RIGHT at you! Ah, you probably have a stupid look on your face, don't you!? Come on, MAN UP!! I gotta say something! But...what? What am I supposed to say!? How come the academy didn't teach me this!? DAMMIT! I HATE THAT PLACE! Gah! Stay on topic! Something must be said! This is my only chance! I only get one first impression, and I can't afford to ruin it! If I screw this up, I'll never become a shinigami! .....I wonder..... if I don't become one, will I have to give my zanpakuto back-- NO! I gotta stay focused! Okay, now, I gotta ask him something!"
Unfortunately, Tokuzen was clearly thinking out loud, but was too deep in his thoughts to escape them and realize what he was doing. He was so deep in fact, that he began to do a little jig, yet another of his little quirks, and yet another quirk he was unaware of. Eventually, he stopped thinking out loud and dancing, unconsciously returning to his original pose before speaking.
"Hey...uh.....can I join this squad?"
He said with a weak smile.
Finnally some damn good literacy congratulations you made the squad now read all the squad announcements and comply with them accordingly
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