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| The Liar by Lupin the Vapour |
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25% |
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| Wiggle by mexicantocos2003 |
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25% |
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| Breaking a Rhyme by Katt105 |
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The Indeed Master Captain
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 Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 1:23 pm
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 7:30 am
Name: Lupin the Vapour
Title: The Liar
Comments: yes please
He hates himself enough
To kill himself but never die.
He thinks that life's to tough
To do anything but lie.
In his life he sees no purpose
But to cause him pain.
Those he tries to draw close,
His life, they seem to drain.
Why does he continue on
Through this dark and dreary land?
He must see hope is long since gone,
Worn from this deserts sand.
Can someone on this Earth
Find a place of healing?
Few are those can give rebirth,
And fewer still are willing.
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Posted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 9:53 am
uh oh
inspiration
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Wiggle
by mexicantocos2003
Wormy worm,
pick up after your self, maggot,
and dress nicely and appropriately
for there will be a ball.
Whoops! The soccer ball landed on you
squashed like a bug,
or in simple layman's terms
"SMASH!!!"
Now you're "well-done"
like a steak.
What? You survived?
Impossible, sir!
How did you do it?
"Wiggle."
((§))
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Posted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 3:52 pm
Username: Katt105
Title: Breaking a Rhyme
Comments: I don't really care.
Number of words: 106
Why don’t break my heart?
Make it bleed.
Now do it over again
You’re still the only one for me.
You’d think I’d learn
But never do
I can’t believe I still want you.
You say you mean it
But never do
I’m allergic to crap
So why don’t I sneeze around you?
After a few rides on a rollercoaster
I get some sense
And get off
As the carts run by
I wave
To something I couldn’t believe
I rode it once
I rode it twice
I rode it three times
And didn’t under stand in till now
Breaking a rhyme never felt so good.
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