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Some print/poster designs

[Kako]
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Posted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 3:26 pm

Some fanart images I'm thinking of selling at Fanime this year. smile Anything you guys suggest correcting?

Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 8:22 am

Hellsing, nice. smile I like the composition of that one, but the hairlines are weird... too smooth, like a hair-helmet more than rooted hair. I'd also maybe make Alucard's expression a little more sinister (the mouth is great, but the eyebrows seem too relaxed) and give Seras some eyebrows.

The second one looks pretty darn good. Again, very nice composition, and overall good work. smile I don't really have any suggestions for that one.

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Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 9:28 am

Yeah, I was just so exhausted after inking Alucard's hair that I kind of skimped on the hairlines. sweatdrop Apparently I also forgot to ink Ceras's eyebrows and, now that I look at it, forgot to shade her ear. XD Thanks Vice, I'll try to fix those up.

EDIT: Is this any better?

Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 3:19 pm

Yeah, that looks MUCH better. biggrin And I know all about forgetting to ink parts of things. I've done my fair share.

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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 10:54 am

Thanks for the help, then. biggrin I have one more piece, the last bit of fanart I plan to do for a week or two. I payed special attention to the hairline this time. razz

Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2009 5:33 am

Another new one, after a long break. Non-Fanart, this time. smile

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