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 Posted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 1:44 pm
Without You
For My Mother
Without you I am so lonely,
You are my one and only.
I feel like I could just die,
I need you just to get by.
I have to have you by my side,
I cannot stand this pain inside.
For without you I am so blue,
I am nothing without you.
My heart feels like it has been stabbed with a knife,
Without you I see no point in life.
You were the first to show me love,
And now I see that you are a gift from above.
(c) 2004
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Posted: Fri Feb 27, 2009 3:30 pm
 Excellent sense of emotion in words, I like the way you do your poetry.
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Posted: Sat Feb 28, 2009 10:26 am
Thank you.
Apparently, a poetry company liked it so much that they published it.
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