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bubblegumflavorlover

PostPosted: Mon Jan 19, 2009 1:34 am


[This was for my Creative Writing class. The assignment was for us to take our favorite story and change the perspective. Soooo, can you guess which story I took? *gringrin* ]


We swam for quite a ways before she submerged us both from the water. I wasn’t used to the weight the air seemed to have, so I began to slip off of the teenager I had been trying to cover all these years. Once she noticed I was slowly returning to the water without her, she let out a gasp and yanked me back into place; from my point of view, her cheeks looked slightly flushed from the over exposure. Even so, she seemed to be stalking this odd ship. Quicker than I could comprehend, we dove back into the water, just to be submerged again; only this time we were on this wooden ledge that was on the side of the ship.

I began to slip again just as this furry, frizzy, King Trident look alike but with more hair came along and sniffed me. I was appalled by such rudeness. Though I couldn’t do anything about it because all I was/am is a pair of sea shells. I swear Ariel needed to get my sister instead; at least she would have been able to stay up. But no!! Ariel had to get the bigger shells just because they were purple. Pfft, teenagers are so impractical.
PostPosted: Mon Jan 19, 2009 4:44 pm


(Wow, nicely done! ) biggrin

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takitsuki
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 29, 2009 2:25 am


hmm nice ~ biggrin
PostPosted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 8:45 am


Nice story! Approved as of now:
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That's going to be replaced with the actual stamp of approval, which hasn't been made just yet. Oh, and... a couple more things. One, you should edit 'Tridant' to be 'Trident'. Two, uh... Was this the Little Mermaid or a variant thereof? That's the only conclusion I can derive from the story. It was an interesting read.

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bubblegumflavorlover

PostPosted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 8:23 pm


Oo, thank you!

And, YES! It is The Little Mermaid!! smile
PostPosted: Sun Feb 01, 2009 9:02 pm


*Final Fantasy victory music plays* 500 XP gained. xd

Buta no Kaabii
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Enusoken
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 4:45 am


lol xD nice glenn. well it is an interesting read : D
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