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 Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 4:24 pm
i thought i could meet other writers here....i write poetry but feel free to post anything....
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Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 4:34 pm
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Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 4:44 pm
piece I did on socialism in GD. No one responsed to it crying
1) Planning the econmeny: the modern econmeny is increadbley complex. Every econmic decsion deals with a great degree of uncertianty due to unrealibe infromation. Since most socialist models invole some kind of econminc central planning of the entire econmeny, knowlage of the whole econmeny is need. Not even the largest super computer could calute the proper output of goods in an econmeny as diverse and large as the US econmony
2) the problem of captial goods: the trademark for the socialist state is worker control fo forms of production causes serval problems
a) the problem of worker behviour: with no possiblity of unemployment and worker control of factories worker out put will be shoddy at best. The if labor hours are the system of value this encourages workers to be inefficant
b)inovation: If captialism were a car entrepreship and innovation would be the fuel and motor. Marx himself knew the constant creation of new modes of production was vital to captialism. Under socialism no profit motive would exist for innovation, the workers would be too afaird of the new forms of proudction displacing them
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Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 4:47 pm
I am terrible with poetry, so I try my luck with stories. My real stories aren't on the computer, but I do have other stories, one starring a...."plump" teenager. Of course, she is the only one in any of my stories, excluding her fairy counterpart.
Anyway, if you would like to read them, I could send you a PM with one.
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Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 4:48 pm
a very good read in deed....i was delighted....i don't mean to be harsh but i thought it was going to be a waste of my time but it was actually quite the oppisite....you are a great writer....i would love to read more....
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Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 4:51 pm
Shogun Gari I am terrible with poetry, so I try my luck with stories. My real stories aren't on the computer, but I do have other stories, one starring a...."plump" teenager. Of course, she is the only one in any of my stories, excluding her fairy counterpart. Anyway, if you would like to read them, I could send you a PM with one. i would love to read it....
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Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 5:04 pm
I write fanfiction mostly, although my Deviant Art account has two quasi-original stories (they each explain the origin of a dungeons and dragons extraplanar creature) and one poem.
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Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 5:59 pm
Most of my stories are on DA, so you can read them there if ya want
Yami92286 is meh Dev name ^-^
I can post an original piece here though wink
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Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 6:06 pm
sweatdrop Yeah...I write. I actually wanna be a writer, but I suck at it. I have a webpage of stuff. Webskills kinda suck too. sweatdrop A Writer's BlockIt is mostly for my Final Fantasy 7 fan fiction...it was written sometime ago. Kinda outdated now. It is novel length but very little of it is online. sweatdrop Haven't updated in a while either.
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Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 8:06 pm
Here's something I wrote. It's my current WIP. And no. I don't normally write like this.
Everyone has a person in his or her life that is the Most Important. Everyone knows what it feels like to be loved. Everyone knows what it feels like to love someone else. People have felt these things from the Beginning Of Time. For most people, their personal Beginning Of Time was the exact millisecond they popped out of their mother's vaginas. From that instant, the little shriveled thing that they were was loved. But what about that one odd goat out. What about that person who doesn't know that feeling. What about that one child who has never felt or known these things. Sure they have a fairly ok life. Their parent's aren't alcoholics or drug users. But they don't quite fully believe that they are truly loved. Maybe they are just cynical. Maybe when they think that they are pretty loved, they have it a hell of a lot better than a lot of people. But what if they don't. What if they don't have it as easy as they think? What if they are the single most stressed out, unloved, and unwanted person on this mud pie called Earth? What if they go around feeling a comfort that isn't there? Will they grow up to be fully functional adults? Or will they be the next Charles Manson. We will have to wait and see. Maybe that child is out there. Maybe she waits in the shadows. Maybe she's standing on the street corner. Maybe she's waiting for that love that she's never felt. They that child isn't a she at all. Maybe it's a he. Maybe he's standing at the bus stop waiting for that same love that she is. Maybe they are both looking for the other, but never think to stop waiting and start searching. When will they start the beginning of the rest of their lives?
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Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 8:34 am
Untamed Toast Most of my stories are on DA, so you can read them there if ya want Yami92286 is meh Dev name ^-^ I can post an original piece here though wink i would love for you to post something here....it would be ever so kind.....
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Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 8:36 am
Fuzzy Necromancer I write fanfiction mostly, although my Deviant Art account has two quasi-original stories (they each explain the origin of a dungeons and dragons extraplanar creature) and one poem. i would love to read them...
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Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 8:39 am
TenshiDarkAngel Here's something I wrote. It's my current WIP. And no. I don't normally write like this. Everyone has a person in his or her life that is the Most Important. Everyone knows what it feels like to be loved. Everyone knows what it feels like to love someone else. People have felt these things from the Beginning Of Time. For most people, their personal Beginning Of Time was the exact millisecond they popped out of their mother's vaginas. From that instant, the little shriveled thing that they were was loved. But what about that one odd goat out. What about that person who doesn't know that feeling. What about that one child who has never felt or known these things. Sure they have a fairly ok life. Their parent's aren't alcoholics or drug users. But they don't quite fully believe that they are truly loved. Maybe they are just cynical. Maybe when they think that they are pretty loved, they have it a hell of a lot better than a lot of people. But what if they don't. What if they don't have it as easy as they think? What if they are the single most stressed out, unloved, and unwanted person on this mud pie called Earth? What if they go around feeling a comfort that isn't there? Will they grow up to be fully functional adults? Or will they be the next Charles Manson. We will have to wait and see. Maybe that child is out there. Maybe she waits in the shadows. Maybe she's standing on the street corner. Maybe she's waiting for that love that she's never felt. They that child isn't a she at all. Maybe it's a he. Maybe he's standing at the bus stop waiting for that same love that she is. Maybe they are both looking for the other, but never think to stop waiting and start searching. When will they start the beginning of the rest of their lives? even if you don't normally write like that it was good and it had a different insight.....thank you for posting it.....
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Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 8:54 am
Jinnari sweatdrop Yeah...I write. I actually wanna be a writer, but I suck at it. I have a webpage of stuff. Webskills kinda suck too. sweatdrop A Writer's BlockIt is mostly for my Final Fantasy 7 fan fiction...it was written sometime ago. Kinda outdated now. It is novel length but very little of it is online. sweatdrop Haven't updated in a while either. messenger mishaps was an enjoyable read......very interesting....but i liked it....
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Posted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 5:40 pm
onlyateardropaway Jinnari sweatdrop Yeah...I write. I actually wanna be a writer, but I suck at it. I have a webpage of stuff. Webskills kinda suck too. sweatdrop A Writer's BlockIt is mostly for my Final Fantasy 7 fan fiction...it was written sometime ago. Kinda outdated now. It is novel length but very little of it is online. sweatdrop Haven't updated in a while either. messenger mishaps was an enjoyable read......very interesting....but i liked it.... Thanks.... confused
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