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 Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 7:38 pm
.:. Help me make a Haiku ;[
Can you add something or help me rewrite it
Snow covored branch
White soft wet powdery and cold
Slowly falls down
I have no idea what I even wrote D8
I just kept thinking
5
7
5 .:.
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 7:47 pm
Haikus are crazy easy O:
They don't even have to make much sense!
5, 7, 5
Just go with the flow!
For instance your Haiku is about snow and how it IS and possibly at the end how its fading away if its falling having started from a Branch.
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 7:56 pm
Haikus are easy
Anyone can achieve it
Just keep on trying
mrgreen
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 7:56 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:00 pm
.:. I'm failing English D;
Snow covered branches
White soft wet and cold
Slowly flies off?
D8
.:.
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:03 pm
feuerleben .:. I'm failing English D;
Snow covered branches
White soft wet and cold
Slowly flies off?
D8
.:. that's 554. Make the last line your middle and replace it with "Leisurely flying away"
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:04 pm
Snow wonderful snow
Falling ever so slowly
Down to earth it comes.
PHAIL! And you may not take this from me as you will be plagiarizing me. :B
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:11 pm
.:. Thank you all for your help ; w; .:.
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:12 pm
TillxGone Snow wonderful snow
Falling ever so slowly
Down to earth it comes.
PHAIL! And you may not take this from me as you will be plagiarizing me. :B Oh that is so mean Denying him a Haiku See what I did there?
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:21 pm
Am I really mean?
I'm just being a writer.
Nothing wrong with that.
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:24 pm
.:. Tilly D8
-bows down-
.:.
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 8:47 pm
Yeah guess it's not bad
Hey I just baked a baguette
Wonder if it's good?
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 9:09 pm
Congrats at baking.
You're now a winner of life.
Hope you feel content.
Don't bow down to me.
You're only fooling yourself.
Stand up and go write.
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 9:18 pm
When writing Haiku
Fly High like butterfly
Let the words flow out.
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Posted: Fri Jan 16, 2009 5:02 pm
 [Grab inspriation.
Music can inspire you.
Listen to music. ]
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