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Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2005 10:08 am
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Posted: Tue Oct 18, 2005 3:54 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2005 2:42 pm
...not sure what to say about this one....not the best I've seen....not by a long shot..but it does have some appealing qualities.....
Overlord's rating: 7/10
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Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2005 2:18 am
Ah well, if everybody liked all the same things - this planet would be a very boring place. biggrin
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Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2005 6:22 pm
Austin likes it, then again Austin lieks any poem that seems to be made around feelings, so he can't really judge
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Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2005 10:40 am
Hmm....I like it....And it makes me think of all the dead people who are paraded around on rotten.com.
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Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2005 10:21 am
I like it. It's pretty deep.
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Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 7:01 pm
i like it a lot! i've already been to a phyciatric place thingy and i had to stay there for 7 days...i don't want to go back to cutting. i like it though. it's very deep. to be a better critic i'd say put more soul into it.
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Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 6:27 pm
I like the ideas of the poem more than the poem itself.
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Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2005 2:42 pm
Flaring Sunset i like it a lot! i've already been to a phyciatric place thingy and i had to stay there for 7 days...i don't want to go back to cutting. i like it though. it's very deep. to be a better critic i'd say put more soul into it. I've been to one too. I was there for about a week and a half. I had to lie when I went back to regular school. It was so embarassing. I never asked my mom to pull of my wristband. It was hard.
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Posted: Sat Nov 05, 2005 2:43 pm
I like the poem. It's set up nicely.
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 2:55 pm
woah...no words...just cant describe it....woah
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Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 10:29 am
spooky_sez I like the ideas of the poem more than the poem itself. i say the same but it is still a great poem
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