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PostPosted: Tue Jan 06, 2009 8:30 pm


The Dozen Roses
A dozen roses I gave to you.
A dozen roses, not one or two;
But a bouquet of flowers just from me.

The roses are red and as beautiful as ever,
But one is different from the rest, and it’s meaning I’ll endeavor.

It is just like the others in that it is red.
It is surrounded by the rest - next to your bed.
In the vase with others all beautifully cut.
If I told you it was fake you would call it a bluff.

Let me tell you what it means.
It does not mean our love is fake;
Something so perfect cannot be a mistake.
It represents my endless love.
It is ever so pure and as white as a dove.

When I gave you those dozen roses, this is what I said that night.
“I will love you until the last rose left has wilted and died.”

I will love you forever no matter the conditions.
Just as this weather proof rose - colored with dye.

Nothing will ever change the way I feel.
As long as I have you and my love in your heart,
I will love you always.
I will never depart.

A dozen roses I gave to you that special day.
I told you the truth and I would never lie.
I will love you forever; every night and every day.

One hundred winters quickly went by
I lay in the ground next to your side
A single fake flower sits in between-us,
Next to our bed, in a vase by your side
PostPosted: Wed Jan 07, 2009 10:01 am


Wow Fennec. That was beautiful. Very nice conclusion especially. I like how you told a story, and ended it too. The silk rose could represent so many things, including the mentioned everlasting love. I like this a great deal.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 19, 2009 8:20 am


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*is too riddled with goose bumps to comment on the amazingness of this poem*



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PostPosted: Sun Feb 15, 2009 2:04 pm


I have one more I would like to share called Shadows.

Shadows

My time with you has been short yet sweet
Why do I feel this way about you?
The kindness and friendship you have shown me cannot be beat.
The way we feel we both see it’s true
Yet problems arise unsurpassable.

You look at me I look at you
I hold you close to me
You turn away with tears in your eyes
Turning away from our friendly ties.
You have fallen for me
But you know I have someone at my side

You fall away from me
Fading away like the night on a brand new day
Like a magnet that wants to get away,

You can’t be near me as a friend
You can’t shake this feeling
These emotions you can’t pretend

I tell you, you are like a shadow
You will always be here with me
Always connected throughout eternity

You are a friend I will always care about.
Even though we can’t be as one I will always be there
By your side like a shadow stroking your hair.

Though I may love somebody else,
You dwell in my heart and mind

You are still my shadow
And I will never forget about you
The kindness and friendship you have shown me cannot be beat
The kindness and friendship you have given me has made me comple

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 7:49 am


I loved the first one. Oh so sweet.

Can't get over its sweetness to read the next one yet.
PostPosted: Thu Mar 05, 2009 9:00 pm


hehe thanks ^^

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The Corrupted Renamon

PostPosted: Fri Mar 06, 2009 9:27 pm


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Beautiful...
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 09, 2009 11:57 am


thanks Rena ^^

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