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Muzik_Freek

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 6:44 pm


Lies, lies, lies,
I won't listen to them,
I can't, I won't, I shouldn't,
You're full of lies.

You think lying to me,
Is going to make this right?
Well, it's not,
You just made it worse.

Quit talking, speaking, saying anything,
Because all that comes out are lies, lies, lies,
sickening, maddening,
Lies.

I can't take it,
All these lies,
They follow me everywhere,
I need to get away.

Stop, just go,
Run away like you always do,
That's all you seem to be good at,
Besides filling my head with lies.

Lies, lies, lies,
I won't to listen to them,
I can't, I won't, I shouldn't,
You're so full of lies.


Um...I dunno about this. I like it, and it makes sense, but I dunno. Something feels...off about it. It doesn't really pertain to anyone, or at least I don't think it does. I kinda just pulled out a peice of paper and let whatever come to mind go onto the page. So, if my mind has some hidden meaning in there, I'll let you know when I figure it out myself.

So....yea. Comments would be greatly appreciated.
PostPosted: Wed Mar 04, 2009 7:42 pm


A life full of lies,
that's what it reminded my off.

You said something was off about it,
maybe it was the flow of the poem,
It has a tendency to change a bit,
but anyhow, it's smoothly written and I like it.

redmind200

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