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 Posted: Mon Dec 29, 2008 8:07 pm
Time rolls by like river raging
I look at you as if your never aging
This obstinate fate crouches hidden
Your smile hides your pain
Like there are no rules to this game you play
I'd say you're winning
We can't stop the clock from ticking
but we can, live just as happily
knowing one day we'll say goodbye
These thoughts hold too much grief
until that day you rest in peace
I'm glad to know you made it worthwhile
I spent so many hours
down here, watching flowers bloom
while you planted them
There's alot of things that a book can't teach
How to love, how to care and how to reach
How to live and learn and say goodnight till the morning
Till the morning
Till the sun comes up and we see our face lit
by the warming dawn
Till the morning
Till the morning comes and the shadows are gone
And these gray eyes can see again
We can't stop the clock from ticking
but we can, live just as happily
knowing one day we'll say goodnight
In the morning, upon tomorrow
These thoughts hold too much disbelief
until that day we rest in peace
I'm glad to know we made it worthwhile
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Posted: Mon Dec 29, 2008 11:54 pm
Oh, I think this is my favorite by far.
I'd be able to give you great positive feedback on this If I weren't so flipping tired, but sadly I'm about to drop.
Just know, I think you should keep writing. I like your work.
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K i t t y the black c a t
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