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 Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 2:52 pm
My words are frozen,
The things I want to say,
Locked up behind the wall,
I want to say it,
These words,
That are craving to get out,
But fear locks them up,
And throws away the key,
These words,
Are added to the box,
Of things I'm too afraid to say.
I've already admitted this all to myself,
These words,
To shameful for me to say.
But, these words, are those that'll save me,
An offer of light,
of hope
These words,
I can't say,
Won't say,
Because I don't want anything to change,
So I stand to the side,
Looking through the glass,
Afraid it'll shatter to pieces,
because of the words I haven't found a way to say.
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Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 6:32 pm
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Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 7:01 pm
It's beautiful, whoever wrote it. I wish I could write like that. But, me is not to good with the letters. But I am getting handy in math. But not to handy... crying
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Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 9:16 am
Yes I did. It's posted on my DA account as well. And thank you Rei for your compliment. I've just only started writing poetry, and I'm not sure how I was doing, so I figured I'd get some feedback sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 9:34 am
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Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 9:41 am
^^ thanks! <.< And to think, this took me like 5 minutes. XD
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Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 4:25 pm
we need a new sub-forum. Lone's poetry corner? I think it will be GREAT!!!
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Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 4:51 pm
Sir Rei we need a new sub-forum. Lone's poetry corner? I think it will be GREAT!!! I agree, i am a fan of poetry heart
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Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 4:55 pm
Who dosen't love a good poem. and we can have like a contest sometime. we can even collect them and them out...with the writer's permissin and have them published. call the book Poems from Gaia. I think it would be wonderful!! come on, we can do it!! mrgreen
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Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 5:00 pm
-_- too much work rei, just way too much work
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Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 5:06 pm
I dun know. I think it is possible. Anything is possible. We're a Guild. That should mean family. Maybe a strange one. But I need computer help alot. sweatdrop But I always know that no matter what there is someone here that can help me. Or atleast tell me what is going on. So, I think that if we work together...we can do it. Or atleast something. But I think that Lone's poetry corner will do for now. lets see...I have to Pm Tem, rita, and lone... ninja
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Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 5:16 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 5:17 pm
yet I am sure that you are not the only poetry lover.
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Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 5:52 pm
^^;;; That's what the sub-forums are for. I just figured I'd post this out on a whim, though I didn't know it would get such a response. sweatdrop sweatdrop sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 6:19 pm
and why not? it is Great!
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