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Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 11:23 am
[FINISHED]Detailed the shirt & jeans and smoothed out the shading on the hand, cloak & hair 2/25: Smoothed out the shading, re-did the ears, changed the jeans, added detail to the stomach.
1/21:I'm PROBABLY gonna re-hash the nose. It just bugs me...
I NEED HELP WITH FUR! (For the ears, they're SUPPOSED to be wolf ears...yeah.)
I also need help shading her abdomen AND THE BACKGROUND. I was thinking some sort of alley with lotsa dirt. I want to keep the main background color the same because that's what I mixed with the skintone to get most of the shadow colors for her skin.
AND ANY help with the jeans is LOVED. (they don't want to work for me >.< )I'm actually happy with the pose this time! YAY!
But, I would like help with the clothes (Wrinkles/folds, accurate detailing, what colors to use, etc.)
Any ideas for accessories are welcome also!
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Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 12:51 pm
The legs are a little bit too long. And to be honest, her boobs are way too far apart.
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Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 9:17 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 03, 2009 6:58 pm
NEW VERSION!
COMPLETELY RE-DONE!
EDIT: Updated, colors blocked in, cloak shaded
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Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2009 4:06 pm
everything looks good to meee :] love the shadinggg
keep up the good workk mrgreen
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Posted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 7:32 pm
UPDATED 1/21.
Help on nose, fur, abdomen ('specially her navel), jeans and background? Please?
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Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 10:16 pm
lol her left side (the hips) is great, but her left side gets cut off by the cloak http://adonihs.deviantart.com/ has a pretty great fur tutorial
http://www.global-b2b-network.com/direct/dbimage/50186857/Ladies__Jeans.jpg
^ check out the style and wash of the jeans (I think that would fit the tone of the picture) notice the slight creases? especially between the legs and around the pockets. Also for the tummy remember ladies have hips heart and even ladies who aren't toned have definition around the belly button and hips
http://daimida.deviantart.com/gallery/#tutorials scandalous? yes, but also a great resource for colouring (her torso's are great IMO)
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Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 7:19 pm
UPDATED 2/25
Smoothed out the shading, re-did the ears, changed the jeans, added detail to the stomach.
Thankyou to everyone who reviewed so far, especially o0kerri0o, your links helped a ton! ^^
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Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 1:03 am
With the colouring, I think it's strange how you put so much effort into the skin, coat and hair but the pants and shirt look so basic. If a picture's aspects aren't balanced then it'll look awkward.
It's a reaaly great pic though.
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Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 5:07 pm
shiny dollar With the colouring, I think it's strange how you put so much effort into the skin, coat and hair but the pants and shirt look so basic. If a picture's aspects aren't balanced then it'll look awkward. It's a reaaly great pic though. What do you mean by 'basic'? If it's due to the shading, that's because I haven't started shading those yet, and if it's something else will you please elaborate?
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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 10:54 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 11:29 pm
Her eye is wayy too smll. Other than that It looks spiffy!
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