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Koneko Kuromira

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 8:57 am


(picture in the works)

Name:
Kinzoku Mari (“beloved”)

From
Chishita

Status:
Dead -- exists as a ghost possessing/sharing Kinzoku Ayame’s body

Background:
Was a very skilled Alchemist specializing in using metal as a teleportation medium -- primarily mirrors, though she never taught anyone else the skill. According to the Kinzoku clan legend, she lost a daughter in childbirth and the loss drove her insane. She kidnapped another newborn, slaughtering everyone/thing in her path before escaping through a mirror. Supposedly, she appears every now and again to kidnap another child in a similar manner. Between those times, though, she’ll appear randomly to make a “bloody mess,” which she often refers to as some sort of art, being “wonderful” and/or “beautiful.” Has several names by which she’s called, including: Bloody Bones, Hell Mary, Black Agnes, Svarte Madam, and the most popular Bloody Mary (her preferred name).

Personality:
Away from the battlefield, she can be rather calm and “normal,” though once there’s the possibility of a fight, her mind quickly frays and she becomes rather insane with blood thirst, often repeating or lengthening words without much reason. She rhymes/speaks in riddles every now and again to confuse/annoy people. Basically she's insane.

Abilities:
She’s an Alchemist, so pretty much anything to do with metal is within easy reach.

Equipment:
“Guardian” of the Muteki Shield, though she is currently allowing Ayame to use it under her supervision

Special:
Has developed a “soul metal” she refers to as quicksilver, which she describes here.

Other:
It is unknown why exactly Mary has chosen to remain with Ayame instead of going her own way once Ouja was defeated (that was the only reason she joined them in the first place -- to defeat him).
PostPosted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 6:33 pm


Added "From" part.

Personality: Added she's basically insane ^_^

Quote:
Chi/Ryoku:
Limitless -- as a ghost, she’s in a way a part of the world and can thus draw it from the world around her and use it as she sees fit.

No. She does not have limitless chi/ryoku. If she did she could take anyone easy, since she'd be able to just capture their soul automatically (if enemy has > chi then they're more resistant to soul attacks/manipulations since they can use their chi to defend with). Due to living longer, her chi reserves have grown greater but her ryoku doesn't (no body), until now of course. Could also explain why she decided to possess Ayame (gain more ryoku). Soul stuff is very complicated :/ I'm still working on the Soul Laws (tells exactly how soul/chi stuff works so it makes sense, so we aren't guessing and along the way we don't screw up then have to go back and change what we already wrote to make things fit)

I/we are going to have to figure out exactly how this works because... She's a ghost but she's possessing Ayame. Not sure if she had a body already, then sealed herself inside Ayame. Or if she was only a spirit (no body) so possessed Ayame. Not sure if she had a body then it would age or not with her soul attached to the mirror :/ Then again soul attachment complicates things further. I think we need a separate topic for the soul laws so we can figure out what makes sense, instead of filling this topic up.

I think Mary will have to have a body before she had met Ayame for things to make sense. Soul/physical stuff needs to be separated as much as possible. If she was only a ghost then it won't explain how she killed all those people, but she could attack their souls though. Gonna take a while to figure this out >.<

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 8:00 pm


Yeah, okay. That makes sense. Yeah, we'll definitely have to figure out the whole Soul Laws thing. I'm liking the whole dead idea, since that goes along with the "Bloody Mary" legend that we're playing her off of, but we can figure that out in the whole Soul Laws section.

Anyway, here's the picture I drew for her -- how I see her as we're rp-ing at least. The stuff around her right arm is her quicksilver. I wasn't sure what the shield's supposed to look like, so I drew up the one she's holding. I know the runes are more western than eastern, but that can easily be changed. I just wanted to get the feel of having the markings around the outside. If we go with the ghost idea, then this is what she looked like when she was alive. Imagine her see-throughy as a ghost. But yeah, this is what I got.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 9:32 pm


Looks great. Personally, I hadn't had an idea of what she looks like but now I do lol. Just noticed, did you draw that with the tablet thingy? smile Can tell from how the lines look.

Idea: What if she has some sort of seal placed on her by the Jiosa? For guarding the mirror? Then she could have like a sign(s) on her forehead or neck or maybe hand or something. Or back of neck. Or in her *eyes* lol that'd be freaking cool. But it'd be small, so you can only see it up close (when she's looking at you before she kills you lol). Like there's kanji in her pupils but it's faded/"see through". Gotta come up with wut 2 (or 1?) kanji it'd be though. I'm thinking she'll have the kanji "forever" written in her eyes.

Costume Design: How about a more Victorian fashion look? Something like these dresses
http://www.fashion-era.com/images/Silhouettes/1915dressfrillsbowcen1000.jpg (Just the dress, not the hair. Maybe the shoes... or she'll have ninja shoes? )
http://www.fashion-era.com/images/Silhouettes/1900dressbertha1000.jpg (minus the top part)
Or maybe an ancient chinese dress look:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hanfu
:/ I just noticed her outfit kind of looks piratey.

About the mirror, I always imagined it being rectangular + big enough to block a person's entire body... but a circle makes sense, but then it's too small... idk complicated. Gonna take a while to think on what it should look like exactly >.<

Yeah there should be symbols around the sides. Not sure whether kanji or kana or maybe some custom symbols -.- These things were supposedly "made by the gods" too so... Idk maybe gonna need another discussion section for the mirror lol.

Oh yeah I posted the Soul Laws up.

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 20, 2008 6:56 pm


I wanted to base her costuming off of this as well as a picture of Sakura Haruno that I can't seem to find again . . . but the dress was really cool. Yeah, I guess it does look a bit piratey, but the tattered sleeves and color scheme and all I think go along with the age and insanity card. It makes her seem harder and more dangerous, especially if her costume leans toward the pic I linked above.

Plus, though she's based off of a western legend/myth, I thought it'd go along more with the rp if she were dressed a bit more ninja-esque. I think the Victorian look would be a bit out of place.

As for the shield, I'm looking into some of the seals and spirally writing stuff that's used in Naruto for an idea. I like the kanji in the eyes thing. I'll have to look into that as well (no pun intended).

Perhaps with the shield, since it's "made by the gods", size doesn't really matter. Maybe it changes to suit a situation. idk. Too big and bulky would make it hard to use, in my opinion, so yeah . . .
PostPosted: Sat Dec 20, 2008 7:58 pm


K i think that's the best costume design possible.

Same for the mirror. I think we need to make our own ancient alphabet to be used for inscriptions for SS. Another thing you may want to look at are hiragana/katakana characters. Maybe mix them up. A while ago I made an phonetic-alphabet which only used straight lines... Yeah I'm making another post for the mirror. Continue discussion on post.

I think the kanji for her should be 末代 (matsudai: "forever; in perpetuity") There's a version of "forever" where both kanji are the same but I think 2 different kanji makes it seem more uneven, symbolizing her insane character.

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 20, 2008 9:39 pm


Okiday. I'll get to work on that. Coolness.
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