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Xx The Lovely Kairi Xx Captain
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 Posted: Fri Nov 28, 2008 2:27 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 03, 2008 8:30 am
Ok, I'm sorry about giving you a lower rating but here's why. the biggest reason is that I'm not a supporter of sex before marrige. call me old fashioned, but it's true. The other reasons are your writting style itself. You're pretty good, for a start. But, your grammer and spelling need to be looked at more carefully in the future. Also, your story did not flow very well. Do you know what I mean? It seemed kinda... uneven. -shrugs-
Sorry I'm a book snobb. -__- I read more than I do anything else (besides sleep) So I will notice alot more than your average person. i didn't mean to be harsh, and if I hurt your feelings I sorry.
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Posted: Fri Dec 05, 2008 9:21 am
Klouse: you meany! You made her cry! I think she did pretty well. I don't support the whole getting busy before getting married, but not everyone has our standards. you should consider her writting abilities, not just her story's content!
Kairi: you do need to be a bit more careful with the spelling though. ^_^ over time your wrtting abilities will get better, so keep on writting! it's hard to write a top notch story first try, but you were very, very close. n__n i'm rooting for you! looking forwards to more stories.
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Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2008 11:20 am
keladrey Klouse: you meany! You made her cry! I think she did pretty well. I don't support the whole getting busy before getting married, but not everyone has our standards. you should consider her writting abilities, not just her story's content! Kairi: you do need to be a bit more careful with the spelling though. ^_^ over time your wrtting abilities will get better, so keep on writting! it's hard to write a top notch story first try, but you were very, very close. n__n i'm rooting for you! looking forwards to more stories. thanks! smile
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Xx The Lovely Kairi Xx Captain
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Xx The Lovely Kairi Xx Captain
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Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2008 11:25 am
Ruukaisu Ok, I'm sorry about giving you a lower rating but here's why. the biggest reason is that I'm not a supporter of sex before marrige. call me old fashioned, but it's true. The other reasons are your writting style itself. You're pretty good, for a start. But, your grammer and spelling need to be looked at more carefully in the future. Also, your story did not flow very well. Do you know what I mean? It seemed kinda... uneven. -shrugs- Sorry I'm a book snobb. -__- I read more than I do anything else (besides sleep) So I will notice alot more than your average person. i didn't mean to be harsh, and if I hurt your feelings I am sorry. Its ok.... We all have our belifs ((SP?))! Sorry i took it hard earlier.... i wasnt having a good day.... My school's orchestra was recrding for the california tour and that was stressfull... About 45 mintues after we were done, i had an astma attack and went to the nurse's office. ((Never had one at school before so it was scary)) Then because of the attack i had caught the cold.... so yeah it wasn't your fault... smile So all in all, I am Sorry! FORGIVE??
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Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 8:19 am
Klouse still has no interrnet up at his new house, so I'm posting his reply. n__n
Klouse says " That's awsome you play in an orchestra. We have a community one here I'm thinking of joining. asthma? ouch. My dad had the same thing. He nearly crashed the car and killed us all because with the asthma and the cold he got coughing so hard he couldn't breathe or see. it was scary. You have no reason to be sorry. I should be the one saying sorry, and kel reminded me, because not everyone has the same beliefs as us, so ya. all forgiven?"
He just moved to a house up on a mountain, and the idiots from telus say there's no way to connected it, but I'm sure something will be arranged.
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Xx The Lovely Kairi Xx Captain
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Posted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 12:57 pm
lol cool! so we all get it! i am feeling better... i stayed home today cause i woke up feeling VERY sick.... thanks! smile
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Posted: Mon Jan 05, 2009 10:07 am
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Xx The Lovely Kairi Xx Captain
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Posted: Fri Jan 09, 2009 11:04 pm
Idk..... Oh! I got a 4.25! smile smile I didnt win though....
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