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 Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2008 11:59 pm
Make a poem and post it here, then if you want to discuss poem, just quote it.
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Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2008 12:02 am
hearts get strong,
minds get weak
the future looks bleak
there for we seek
what we search for we dont know
with each inhale we begin to blow
there for we will be waiting so,
the heart can lead us to the best of all.
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Posted: Tue Nov 25, 2008 12:47 pm
ok i just wrote it so it not to gr8 but yea here it is
you don't trust me like you say you do i look in your eyes and see emptiness looking back i feel your distant stare looking at me all day you assume every thing and ask me nothing i start to feel u slipping from my life and i start to ask myself what did i do to deserve this?
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Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2008 10:47 am
Here is a new poem I just made.
What is life?
What is it when we exist
do we just strive to be?
do we strive to become?
what is a life where you control
but are controlled
what is being
is it flesh?
is it the moment
where life is going is our question
our answer is we dont know
what is being alive.....
existance
being
control
questioning
Is that all there is to life?
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Posted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 8:02 pm
TORN IN TWO
my mind is a haze my heart is in pain im torn and broken i dont know what to do im lost at a four way stop with out a map which way to go i do not know i close my eyes and try to follow my heart but it just leads me to pain my mind is a haze my heart is in pain where are you when i need you most im lost and confuzed i need you cuz im torn in two...
there's more but its to long lol im lazy
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Posted: Wed Dec 24, 2008 4:53 pm
You
You give me comfort when i'm afraid
you are my strength when i'm weak
you are my dark and my light
you lead me through the hard times
you heal my heart when im depressed
no matter what i kow you'll always be there for me
you are a part of my life...
you are my life...and my heart
i wrote this thinking of some one i truly love heart
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Posted: Sat Jul 03, 2010 6:55 pm
the Poem of life
to grow and become is never what it means to live...
life is nothing without your heart
your heart is not just in your body its who you are
its the essence of what you will become
your heart is the part of you that ventures and becomes
your heart takes chances
your heart is the minds eye of what you must do
I over think things but my heart guides my thoughts
what will guide yours?
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