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 Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 3:54 pm
Fresh out of water,
I'm already drowning,
Feels like I'm swimming
In circles
Trying to find my way
Out of this sudden love lust.
It started as nothing,
No emotions attached,
Yet I knew that our alluring motto
Was always going to be
A cover story.
How could we be
So carelessly close
And yet so calm
As if nothing was happening?
Promises to others remain kept,
Yet broken in our secret meeting,
Finding pleasure in a
Solitary spring of comfort.
A game of hide-and-go-seek
We've begun with our hearts,
Dropping clues
Only to watch them vanish
As if clouds rising to the sun.
The truth burns bright,
Yet has blinded us
To stumble from
Eternal happiness...
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Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 6:08 pm
I loved it. Your work is always so great. But I can't relate to it yet. I've always been single.
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Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 7:51 pm
I love how the first stanza is so full of harsh (can't think of a better way to describe them) words. It's almost brutal. I love it.
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Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 8:31 pm
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