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 Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 1:40 pm
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=100396037
hopefully that link works
Please tell me what you voted.
I threw the song together within about 10 minutes.
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Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 5:39 pm
A little melancholy, but its nice.
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Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 6:59 pm
PiercedPixie2 A little melancholy, but its nice. Well, depression and that stuff does run through my family, and I have been depressed and attempted suicide before, but the lyrics are just feelings I have. That's the only way to write good lyrics in my opinion.
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Posted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 8:28 pm
I voted a 5. Much better than the other two.:sweaT:
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Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 5:35 am
KirliaEmi I voted a 5. Much better than the other two.:sweaT: Thanks :3 I thought it was a lot better too. But I don't know much about song writing. I just do this when I am bored. I can write music for drums because I am better at drums then I am anything else.
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Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2008 6:18 pm
I had to read your comment in order to know that it was a song. xd Otherwise, I thought they were poems.
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Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2008 7:38 pm
KirliaEmi I had to read your comment in order to know that it was a song. xd Otherwise, I thought they were poems. All the stuff I write are songs. I can't do that poetry stuff anymore. Just lost interest and lack skill of it.
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Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2008 5:26 pm
I doubt the skill's lacking. Most likely your loss of interest is the main reason.
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Posted: Sun Nov 23, 2008 5:03 pm
KirliaEmi I doubt the skill's lacking. Most likely your loss of interest is the main reason. Yeah, you're probably right. I wrote poems when I was very depressed. I seem to be happier now, so all I write is lyrics to songs.
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Posted: Mon Nov 24, 2008 5:46 pm
xd I don't know if lyric writing's harder than poem writing. You should be thankful.
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Posted: Mon Nov 24, 2008 8:25 pm
Voted! Five. Honestly that's mostly because I know you. : ) That's not as a bad as it sounds, promise. I just don't know what kind of music this would go to, metal I should hope. I'm just a little stuck on You're Gonna Go Far, Kid by The Offspring so I can think about it very well at the moment. I don't mind dark lyrics, so that's all well and good. One thing that bothered me personaly was the capitilization, my one and only gramatical pet peev... sorry, I guess that's pointless though.
Good job, I couldn't write lyrics if I tried so I have the upmost respect for your work.
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Posted: Wed Nov 26, 2008 4:13 pm
Tank13 Voted! Five. Honestly that's mostly because I know you. : ) That's not as a bad as it sounds, promise. I just don't know what kind of music this would go to, metal I should hope. I'm just a little stuck on You're Gonna Go Far, Kid by The Offspring so I can think about it very well at the moment. I don't mind dark lyrics, so that's all well and good. One thing that bothered me personaly was the capitilization, my one and only gramatical pet peev... sorry, I guess that's pointless though. Good job, I couldn't write lyrics if I tried so I have the upmost respect for your work. Thanks for the 5.
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