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wellwisher

PostPosted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 7:49 pm


OK, I've noticed, from peoples profiles, and from some RPing posts. That some of you could improve your RPing abilities. Now, in this thread, I will be PMing people who I think might need to improve. if you need to improve your RPing here, that isn't a bad thing, usually it means you could use more detail in your posts. If I ask you to post here, I would like you to post a combat response to the post at the end of this particular post, and then a response to the dialouge after that. At which point, I can make some suggestions to your RPing style in hopes that everyones style will reach a base level. Please post with your character for this RP, it will not be part of the actual RP, it merely makes it easier then making a brand new character for pracice.

I am aware that this post includes a GM as it takes two actions in a combat, but it is a practice so for the purpose of this exercise you only have to respond.
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Teysa liftd her two Ōdachi, unsheathed, pointing them at her opponent. Concentrating on the pure metals of her Ōdachi, she imbued them with her left blade with lightning, and her right blade with Fire energy. With these powers, she'd be able to take down most other element powers. Teysa launches herself towards her opponent, her blades angled away from her to increase stability in her speed. With her two weapons angled like this it doesn't increase her speed, but it does ensure that she can quickly change her angle if the enemy would move away from the basic targetted location.


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Teysa sat down at the coffee shop, she was waiting for someone to arrive. "I wonder where they are?"
A few minutes after ordering her coffee, "Coffee for Teysa?"
After sitting down and taking a sip from her coffee, she picks up the newspaper and reads the head article. "Rogue human with extremely rare abilities has leveled an entire city."
PostPosted: Mon Nov 17, 2008 11:40 am


1. "hm i from what i see of my position i can't dodge or use elemental magic so that gets rid of most of my choices... wait!! if i summon the spirit of the sword (griever) it would go right in front of me and it would survive that attack."
* the sky is going black and thunder is rolling the sword levitates to the sky and 5 dim lights surround it, it forms a pentagram and the sword shoots a black energy down and and arising form the energy is a giant creature, this creature looked like some sort of lion with 5 blood red horns on it head and the tattered wings that could have belong to a fallen angel goes down in front of Alexis and is ready to block the attack of Alexis opponent*

(Alexis mp:300-299=1 mp)
(griever ((spirit of the sword)) mp:1000)

2.Alexis goes inside the coffee shop for another cup of Joe. she notices some girl reading today's paper . "what are you reading there?' Alexis asked bluntly.

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