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Down the Rabbit Hole (Of Ashes and Snow)

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misuyume

PostPosted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 7:05 pm


" Down the Rabbit Hole "

Nothing can stop this colorless feeling,
In both mind and body.
Empty words that pour from oblivion,
Into the unknown creases of life,
And down the rabbit hole,
In which I am buried.
Mind left wondering how,
Or when this has happened.
And as I stare,
At this blank ceiling above me.
Enclosed in this room of solitude.
I think of who I am,
And what I've become.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 7:14 pm


Wow. That was really, like, drained of emotion. Which is great, because that's what it is.
Favorite lines -
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Empty words that pour from oblivion,
Into the unknown creases of life,

Silver Wingling
Crew


Tseko the Living Shadow

PostPosted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 6:46 am


very nice... i think its pretty good...
PostPosted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 3:53 pm


Very descriptive. Your poetry always touches me one way or another because of the artistic descriptions.

LunarHybrid
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