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Davis Shadenhand
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 12, 2008 4:42 pm


Just a flow of emotion... Worthless words.

Fast and dirty
Not so sturdy
these words I weave
twist and heave
so Vio-lent-ly
that I can barely see
Is this me?
I dig a little deeper
The cliff gets steeper
The scene gets clearer
as the end gets closer
I know for sure
I hold the cure in one hand
the disease in the other
linked for ever
these dark blood brothers
sons of the pill mother.
A machine heedlessly diagnosing
needlessly infecting
constantly disecting
human behavior
as the benefactors savor
the sweet sentiments of the share holders
as the money flows in like boulders
in a land slide
On the flip side
it's a hell of a ride
watching these people pop pills
as these pills pop people
which still serve as staples in the steeples
of the houses of people
because He doesn't live there anymore
Gave the house up
when they covered the floor
with the dirty dollar bill
as accomplished as we feel
we'll never feel real
So fast dirty and full of emotion
I cast this black bottle on this ocean
in hopes that the message
will float forever.

End
PostPosted: Wed Nov 12, 2008 6:36 pm


very odd.. not my favorite, not my least favorite though... not by a long shot... it kinda reminds me of rap...

Tseko the Living Shadow


Silver Wingling
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 12, 2008 6:55 pm


I like it. It is kind of a rap, isn't it?
PostPosted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 3:28 am


I don't know... I was just pouring out emotion.... I suppose you could put it to a beat though..

Davis Shadenhand
Crew


Scazarith
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 1:41 pm


The very begginning struck me as being very sexual. I like writing things like this myself though, just letting words flow. It really helps with ideas for other writings and sometimes helps you find out how you see the world.
PostPosted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 5:18 pm


Scazarith
The very begginning struck me as being very sexual. I like writing things like this myself though, just letting words flow. It really helps with ideas for other writings and sometimes helps you find out how you see the world.


it started as a gritty sexual grinding poem, But I think it sorta evolved into a rant about how I hate the pharmaceutical companies

Davis Shadenhand
Crew

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