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Navenna

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Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 3:06 pm

Judging Rubric:

6 - Orginality
7 - General Appeal
7 - color Usage & layering
5 - How well it works with the round's Theme
25 - Total Score

People who still need to submit:

- - S a r a L a n g -

- -Le Chien Chat-

- Sexy_Top_Model

- DanJF

- [ Danger Woman ]

Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 8:19 pm

65/75
959/1100

- S a r a L a n g -

Xin's environment

Dee - 6. 6. 6. 5 = 23
Sara,great job. (: I'm really liking this one.
It's interesting and amazing. Great color spreading.
Great layering. It's interesting and you used the right greens.

gray- 6.6.6.5-23
This is a marvolous recovery from lasy week sara. GReat job! i love the layering and how you acted with the stripes on the shirt, When i first saw this one i thought it would be my fave this round, but when i double looked i realised that the naked patches of this avatar are dragging you down a bit. it looks very un finished.

Navi-
5.4.5.5=19
I'm not nearly as impressed with this as the others seem to be. It's too simple in my eyes and there are bit blocks of black on the arms and head (the mask and hair combo is what makes it too much black on the head). The tones in some of the items is off. And I don't like the vertical striped pants with the horizontal stripe of the shirt. It makes it look disconnected... As does the weird layering with the katana swooping behind the avi's legs instead of in front.

Navenna

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Navenna

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Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2008 5:40 pm

71/75
994/1100

[ Danger Woman ]

Navi's environment

Dee - 6. 7. 7. 5 = 25
Danjah, I love it! They layering absolutely amazes me.
I like how everything flows so nicely. This has to be my favorite this round.
The hair definitely adds to the avatar. It goes nicely with the avi.

gray=6.5.7.5=23
this avatar is very naked, especially the legs. I love the layering in the torso but theres not much wow. it looks good, and im a huge fan of this one, for the present round but the emptyness is whats killing you this round.

Navi-
6.6.6.5=23
This is very cute and screams instantly that it was made by you. The skirt layering is super cute but I don't like the layering of the riding hood and bustier together... it looks weird to have that part of the cloak-part of it covered. Red shorts or something to fill the legs bareness a little more would have been awesome.

Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2008 5:43 pm

61/75
954/1100

Sexy_Top_Model

Navi's environment
(I own it all except the purple skin dye, but she thought I did because of the tattoo glitch with environments so don't count it against her)

Dee - 6. 5. 5. 5 = 21
Sexy, this one looks pretty nice. (: I'm liking the purple skin dye, it really stands out,which I like in this avi. The layering is kind of confusing, and doesn't add to the avatar, but makes it look not so amazing. I'm a bit disappointed, for I think you could have done better than this.

gray= 6.4.5.5=20
im really not a fan of this avatar. frankly i think the purple throws the balance off a bit, with nav's large inventory you could have done something else to fill the void.

Navi-
6.5.4.5=20
The purple is really eye-catching against the two shades of teal you used but the red distracts from the entire outfit. It's not balanced enough and doesn't really fit with the other colors. I would have loved to see you use more white accents or perhaps a third shade of blue or something instead. (I am tempted to buy the purple skin dye for how it looks with teal, though...)

Navenna

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Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 10:59 am

65/75
971/1100

-Le Chien Chat-

Navi's environment

Dee - 6. 5. 5. 5 = 21
Ah, Chien, I'm loving the simplicity of this avatar. One thing I don't ilke about this is, though, is that to me, it seemed you payed more attention to making the colors match, rather then making it look appealing to the eye. Whether that's what you were doing or not, that's what it seemed like to me. I know, from your past entries, that you could make something more interesting than this.

gray- 6.6.6.5=23
oh.... wow.... i've never expected this type of style from you?! with navi's inventory you could have done something really spectacular with your style chien. this is rather disapointing.

Navi-
6.5.5.5=21
This avi makes me think of the old school '04/'05 AT fashion style. Simple bold colors matched together back when there weren't many items to pick from and this kind of avi was impressive. But it's been about four years since then and this kind of avi now just reads as simple. =/ It's well done and all... but isn't terribly interesting to look at as far as layering. I also think you should have used that hair in the more angelic-blue tone. It looks too white as is.

Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 6:14 pm

63/75
966/1100

DanJF

Xin's Environment

Dee - 6. 5. 6. 5 = 22
Dan, I love how all the avis you make are so original. I think you did a great job with color. But overall, it's not that appealing.

gray-
5.4.5.5=19

Navi-
6.5.6.5=22
Part of me wants to hate this avi... but it's really visually gripping once you look at it more than just at a glance. The textures and patterns of the items clash, but in a way that keeps making me stare. I still can't really decide if it's good or not...

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Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 8:44 pm

Winner: [ Danger Woman ]
Loser: Sexy_Top_Model

Round 14:

71 - [ Danger Woman ] --- 994

65 - -Le Chien Chat- --- 971

65 - - S a r a L a n g - --- 959

63 - DanJF --- 966

61 - Sexy_Top_Model --- 954

Overall:

[ Danger Woman ] --- 994

-Le Chien Chat- --- 971

DanJF --- 966

- S a r a L a n g - --- 959

Sexy_Top_Model --- 954

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