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"We're Not So Different After All" [WIP]

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Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 12:21 pm

So, after getting ANOTHER new DevArt account due to uncontrollable circumstances (read: stupid crap) I'm back again with more realism.

This piece is broken down into two sections for the moment, as each half has a different person and a different light source.

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Help on shading would be appreciated.

Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 3:19 pm

Hello. Well, my internet is being slow so it's only loading part of your pictures (stopped at the neck for the Korean girl and ...... will not load the second picture... sweatdrop goodness; I think it's 'cause they're so big). Well, I'll critique the 'part a' one (Korean girl). Her head is a little too narrow. Considering she's a girl and not yet a woman, she should have more chub on her cheeks... and I don't mean she has to look rotund or anything. Just, usually we have more chubs to our cheeks when we're not fully adults, and still have that chub sometimes when we're adults. Also, I think her nose is a bit too long (probably making the face look so narrow with how long it is). mrgreen And the eyes should have a little bit more of a slant to them, like the inner point of the eye (the part of the eye close to the nose) should be angled downward a bit more. And perhaps you could lessen the point at the corner of her lips 'cause people's lips don't have points on them ('cept for the Joker mad d ) so if you just erase that pointiness at the end of her mouth then it'll look more natural. Anway, I really like your shading and her hair/eyebrows. Good good job! She's very pretty. Hope I helped a little (and hopefully didn't hurt your feelings. sweatdrop I can get a tad... critical? sometimes). Have fun! mrgreen

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