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 Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 11:11 pm
Gliding along the ridge of your back,
Rising upon the arch of your hip,
The sun radiates off your skin
As it shines
Like a beautiful fallen star
Breathing in the scent of
The soft earth on which it has landed.
Gushes of wind echo from your
Parted lips,
Murmuring promises of forever,
If only the waves of time
Would slow,
Or the leaves of Eden refuse
To change color.
Praises of an eternal union
Arise from a private moment under
The stars as the skies poor
Open with tears,
Unable to contain the love
Your heart radiates to the darkest
Region of this tropical paradise.
In one simple moment,
The sensation of grass upon bare skin
Sends a shower of falling stars
Across an amber colored sky.
Autumn has never looked so beautiful...
Is this how eternity ends?
At the moment of true bliss?
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 11:18 pm
bravo, I loved it. I like how you went out of you confort zone.
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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 11:21 pm
Its taken a year to get this far (comfort zone & esteem wise) so its good to hear that kinda feed back. Although, I'd rather call it writers block xd
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Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 12:10 pm
This poem is sexy as hell. I'm just sayin. Really.
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Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 7:43 am
Scazarith This poem is sexy as hell. I'm just sayin. Really. Agreed.
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Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 12:52 pm
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