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 Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2005 10:30 pm
Well here is the unfinished banner that I promised. What I wanted to do was find either a poem/something poetic about each element and put that in the window underneath each one...so what do you all think? Suggestions please, wasn't sure what kind of direction to take with it. ^^  Edit: For some reason it doesn't appear to be showing up...click here to see it...
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Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2005 10:17 am
3nodding Cool. Very cool.
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Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2005 12:48 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2005 2:27 pm
I bring you back to life! Now I need to make the pic work again...
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Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2005 3:13 pm
I can see it, and I like! biggrin
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Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2005 3:50 pm
Bad poem, but at least a first idea... or soemhting...
Breath of life, of hope, of deed,
Breath of the forest, the rhythm of trees,
Breath of laughter and freedom and ease,
Breath of fire,
Carrier of Storm,
Ripples the water,
Wanders and roams.
Bringer of seasons,
sower of seeds,
ruffles the feathers
and gives them speed.
Breath intangible, yet mobile
Breath of the word
Gasp of the heart
Breath of the wind
The breath that never stops.
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Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2005 5:03 pm
Ooh, can we suggest the stuff that would go under our respective Elements?
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Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2005 11:32 pm
Of course, I was hoping for more suggestions. smile
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Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 5:25 am
i likey...i likey...very nice...im thinking of sumthin to go under the respective elements...u want like a short 3-liner poem??? or sumthin long a melodic? (im a pretty good poet...or so im told)
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Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 8:45 am
JJax i likey...i likey...very nice...im thinking of sumthin to go under the respective elements...u want like a short 3-liner poem??? or sumthin long a melodic? (im a pretty good poet...or so im told) If you think it'll fit into the box, it'll work for me. ^^
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Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2005 9:21 am
Haiku...
The power to change
To sustain our life and world
The power of Water
I think it needs a bit of work. Any suggestions?
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Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 12:06 pm
little dark wind poem...but here goes...Haiku...
Sustenence of wind
The power of quiet force
Fear not silent death
Its kinda dark...(see the last line) but if u like ti you can add it to yuy banner...ill try to come up w/other ones for the other elements...
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Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 12:10 pm
here goes for spirit...
Control of the mind
Tremble before the mighty
Wisdom is Power
I kinda like this one...but yet again...if u dont like it...feel free to tell me and ill try again...
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Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 12:13 pm
and for water
Calmness of Water
Giver of life and bringer
of the Sea-Born force
same rules apply...u dont like...tell me and ill change...
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Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 12:16 pm
now for earth...
fortitude of earth
Grounded and Brave it Remains
Shows all the right path
Same rules apply...
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