Don't worry, I post enough gay men to cancel you out x___X hahaha.
I ... don't know what suggestions to make except to just draw it in? XD;;; Okay, most un-useful suggestion ever. Uhmm, some opinions:

I'd add a belt or something to the kitty girl so you can show off her sexy body, because her coat draped over her body would cover up all her nice curves
sad Dunno if you wanted anatomy-ish stuff either:

Like, I ignored the proportions because last time, you said you just eyeball them and go your way XD But uhm, the one on the floor, her leg, it kind of tapered off too much for my tastes x___X (I think you just didn't draw it completely, and just left the kitty girl to cover it up) I dunno. And I just gave a suggestion for the angle of the other leg.
The kitty girl's arm, I made it look more locked (like when you lock your arm if you're holding yourself up like that?) And I also gave her more of a palm of a hand, because her hand looked really flat.
I also wanted to thin out the girl on her back's arm, but I'm nt good at drawing people with pudge, so I just didn't do anything. Imo, it looks a little too thick, even if she's a little pudgy, but that's just my opinion.
Aradjfkasdj I'm not perfect, and these are just my opinions, I don't mean that I'm better or anything ;;; You don't even have to take my suggestions if you don't want XDD
But anyway, I really love how refreshing your style is, and you did an amazing job with their expressions. It's really adorable, and you can tell how much they love each other ^^;