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Melodine Cantus

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 6:54 am


Quest thread for ursari~
PostPosted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 6:54 am


Name: Eri’del
Family: Aishe
Gender: Female
Stage: Apprentice
Seller of: Song Weaving – The main, and toughest task of song weaving is to create a song. It takes a while for one to finish making a song; a lot of editing usually goes on in the process. Once this is done however, next is the tricky part. The song has to be woven into tapestries to preserve it and allows others to learn of it.
Eyes: Emerald green
Horns: A creamy white, with silver circle markings.
Hairstyle: Eri’s teal coloured hair is mostly wavy, though it curls into ringlets at the ends. Her hair is parted on the left side, with a wavy fringe almost covering her right eye. Her hair is of a medium length; it ends a few inches past her shoulders. Part of Eri’s hair on the left side is loosely braided and held with a wrap.
Skintone: A light tan
Personality: Eri’del is usually in a bright mood, and is a bubbly individual that loves to interact with others and explore new places. Eri is inquisitive of the things she has not seen before and usually asks many questions about it to satisfy her curiosity, often driving the answerer to sheer annoyance by her babbling. Eri however, has a good heart, and feels guilty whenever one snaps at her for asking too many questions, but she sincerely wants to learn more. The ursari can be heard humming a tune even when she is not Song Weaving. Behind this cheery face is a girl that can be very serious in her work and is fiercely dedicated to it.
Position/Expression: A thoughtful look while holding a pen and paper or weaving?
Outfit: Her top is similar to that in the ref below, however, the outer blouse is of a aquamarine colour and the inner part is black with silver patterns. She also wears a flowing skirt with bells crossing at the hips.
Items?: Eri dons a headpiece similar to the one in the ref below and wears silver dangly earrings.
Etc: Mostly, you have artistic freedom because I’m not very good at creativity. |D Also feel free to put on some makeup for her? Eri likes to be pretty XD
References: If applicable. Top, Headpiece, Sketch of hair and horns

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 6:56 am


Kyunru

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 6:58 am


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PostPosted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 7:01 am


open for crits! biggrin
PostPosted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 7:10 am


Though I'm not a expert, I'd say it works. You have a original idea that is specific enough to not be vague. It actually incorporates two things the Aishe can do, sewing and music. It's really interesting!

MoonKitsune

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 8:46 am


Not an expert either but this looks very interesting. For the pose, may I suggest you give her something more related to the weaving part? Like choosing her threads with a song sheet nearby? I think that would be original and closer to her seller item.

Want to check mine? :3 Ursari concept
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