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Ode to My Shoes

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Fluffy Pankakes

PostPosted: Mon Nov 03, 2008 6:48 am


lol well to start off, I wrote this poem in 5th grade with many others to put into a book of poems for Mother's Day. This one is entitled "Ode to My Shoes"

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"Ode to My Shoes"

Ode to my pink canvas hightop shoes!
They have taken me places.
They have seen many faces.

I've seen the world in these shoes
But now they're something I've got to loose,
I've outgrown these poor old shoes.

In England I'd see it all
Big Ben would seem a thousand feet tall!

We'd go to France, to the tip of the Eiffel Tower,
All in a mid-summer shower.

Scurrying across Asia; India would be first,
Only in my dreams I go to India, now my heart is ready to burst.

I'd see the people, the places, the Taj Majal.
Me and my shoes would have seen it all.

But now, my sweet, I must bid adieu
To these beautiful pink canvas hightop shoes.

PostPosted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 11:14 pm


Very good poem for a 5th grader! I liked it a lot, very warm and fun.

LunarHybrid
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Fluffy Pankakes

PostPosted: Thu Nov 06, 2008 4:03 pm


LunarHybrid
Very good poem for a 5th grader! I liked it a lot, very warm and fun.

lol ^-^ Thank you! haha

More to come from my little poetry book later!
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