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 Posted: Sat Nov 01, 2008 1:46 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 01, 2008 1:48 pm
Pala Concepts Quote: Name of Pala: Donnie Owner: fatcat17 Gender: male Category: complex Type: espa Style: living paradox Skin Color + Markings: i'd like his legs to be colored from the bottom up like a cloudy sunset, and his arms to be mike a cloudy night, with little white spots like stars. On his belly area, there's what appears to be a black hole like thing (think of the colors of a brand new bruise [dark purples/black/blue] and swirl it together) because this marking is like a black hole, shreds of the colors from the rest of his body look like they are becoming sucked in. Eye color: crimson red Hair style + Color: i'd like his hair to be kind of long and down to his shoulders, with the ends trailing off into little wispy bits of smokey fog. His hair would be a deep blue fading to white at the ends and into the smokey wisps. Other Edits?: the fluffy parts coming off his arms and legs would also trail off into wispy smokey bits (if possible). Also, can his mouth be edited into more of a sad frown? I'd like him to have a black and white striped small t-shirt, but i would like it to sort of be ripping apart, showing the dark swirl thing on his belly He would be wearing ap air of ratty denim short with holes in various places on them. These shorts would be sagged down his hips a little bit, with black and lime green checkered belt held through the loops. Reference Images: shirtsunsetblack holeStage?: adult
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Posted: Sat Nov 01, 2008 1:49 pm
Ursari Concept Quote:  Name: Ciciao Family: Pitivo Gender: female Stage: apprentice Seller of: Living Metal. From an early time in Ciciao's life she could take pieces of metal and create beautiful and intricate objects. After these objects were created, she would p***k her finger and drip a bit of blood on the metal object. All of the sudden, the object would come to a sort of "life" moving and interacting with anyone who held it. These objects are usually expensive, and whomever's blood they hold is who they bond closest to. Depending on what the metal object is, depends on what it does. (description is of what her mastery of the craft would be like) Eyes: vivid teal green Horns: small ebony deer antlers Hairstyle: short and light strawberry blonde Skin: her skin is a light caramel. From her hands halfway to her elbows, she had a black and white striped tattoo. It fades as it goes up her arm. Personality: Ciciao is overconfident, she's not aways aware of how she rubs off on people. She doesn't really understand the concept of 'awkward' and so nothing is off limits to her. She can be fairly rude if you get on her bad side or she's in a bad mood. Although she's very self-assured, Ciciao doesn't like to gossip with other people, and is usually very shy about exactly how she feels. She's completely open about everything but her feelings. She also lives by two mottoes: "Curiosity killed the cat, but satisfaction brought it back" and "Love all, trust few, do wrong to no one." Ciciao's curiosity is almost insatiable, she will go digging through anything to find out the answer to something if she's curious enough. By do wrong to no one, Ciciao doesn't gossip about other people's issues. She will talk about things that have happened, but not about how ursari x feels about ursari y, if you tell her a secret, you can guarantee she'll keep it. Position/Expression: she should look overconfident, maybe with one hand on her hip and the other holding up one of her living creations. Outfit: She wears a dress that has a style similar to this, but it has no sleeves. The dress is light blues and whites with gold accents. On the "skirt" area it fades to a darker blue (from white) at the waist. Around her wrist is a intricate bracelet that appears to be twisting and changing constantly. Around her ankle she has another constantly changing bracelet. Both of these bracelets act as protectors, in times of danger they will turn into weapons for her. They also sometimes change into little tools and things to make life a little easier for Ciciao. Around her waist are shiny ropes of metal, each with small shiny objects dangling off it. She uses these in case of emergency. Dangling around her neck is a small glass tube of blood. Items?: The thing that she is holding up in her right hand appears to be a sort of cat in a perpetual kitten stage, though made of living metal and it has intricately carved patterns all over it. Etc: Because her living metal creations are in high demand, Ciciao if very wealthy, and often creates whatever she wants. Rarely, she will take commissions and do what someone else wants for a living metal creation. (happens more so after she masters her craft) References: If applicable:hairstylecolor swatchQuote: RP Prompt 1 Wrote: Your Ursari has not been able to find a master and cannot be considered an adult until she or he does. There are two main types of Masters, Tutors who focus on one apprentice only and Teachers, who focus on a large group of children. With everything in the Ursari world, there are many tiers within Masters, depending on their skill. Why hasn't your Ursari found a Master? How does it make them feel? What do they do to get one?
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Posted: Sat Nov 01, 2008 1:51 pm
Kyunru Concept Quote: //____[Kyunru Information] # of Stages: adult only Name: Riphe Gender: male Style: Fading Clouds Eyes: oranges, reds, and yellows (like a sunset) Body: his body is a light blue with cloud like patterns wafting up his legs. All over his body he has small, pale yellow specks, like stars. Wings: small black feathered wings Horns: medium sized black deer antlers Tail: like his hair, it is long and the ends fade into clouds and wispy bits. Hairstyle: his hair is black, and his hair is long and the ends fade out into little puffy clouds and wisps Personality: he's extremely anti-social, but not in your average way. He will go up and meet new people without a problem, but if he doesn't like them he'll just walk away mid-sentence. It's slightly difficult ot be his friend, but that's mostly because he doesn't want many friends, he just wants one who will be his best friend and his mate. Position/Expression: he should be floating/flying, with his arms drawn close, and an "i reject you" sort of expression on his face Items?: around his neck he has a couple of ribbons of various widths. One is black, one is navy blue, and one is pale yellow like the specks on his body. Etc: References: If applicable: n/a ((one day!! XP ))
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Posted: Sat Nov 01, 2008 1:58 pm
Ieldi Concepts Quote:
Name: Kabir Spirit: elf owl Gender: male Stage: ??? Requiem Veil: ???
Appearance: Skin: Hair: Outfit: Wings:
Personality: Position/Expression: Items: References: [x]Quote:
Name: Bhramara Spirit: little owl Gender: male Stage: ??? Requiem Veil: ???
Appearance: Skin: Hair: Outfit: Wings:
Personality: Position/Expression: Items: References: [x]
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Posted: Sun Nov 02, 2008 12:58 pm
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Posted: Sun Nov 02, 2008 3:52 pm
Crit for you~ ^^
I like her trade! The one thing I might specify is that since your Ursari will be an apprentice, she simply won't be *that* good at her trade just yet. I think it's unlikely that she'd be wealthy on her own. I would confirm this with Natsu, of course, but from what I understand the apprentices are just learning. What you've described sounds to me more like Master-level skill with the trade. It'd be a great goal but I think it might be too powerful for an apprentice concept.
I like her personality too, except for one thing - it seems contradictory that she doesn't like to hurt other people but that she's also often inadvertently rude. Is she accidentally rude and then apologizes profusely, or something? Is she blissfully unaware that she's being rude until someone else points it out? XD
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Posted: Sun Nov 02, 2008 4:29 pm
oh yes, with her trade i figured it would be like that when she got to master level, but i wasn't sure that it would make sense if i described it as when she was an apprentice.
ah, i see what you mean :3 for her not liking to hurt people, i meant like on purpose and physically, but i'm thinking i'll just take that out and do something else with it :V
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Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2008 5:07 pm
Love her ability, so creative! Also, I want that dress :3
Personality-wise, I'd like to hear more about how she interprets the "do wrong to no one". Obviously she doesn't consider being rude as doing wrong, she's you've already mentioned her rudeness. What things does she avoid, then? If she does do wrong, does she try to make amends in order to live according to that motto? And for the curiosity motto, does that mean she's the type to go digging for information if she can't get it out of people themselves?
Just wondering how far she takes these mottoes, is all.
Overall, great job!
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Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2008 7:49 pm
thanks for the crit! =D
i see what you mean about the mottoes, i was fairly vague XD so i added a little bit about each one. the curiosity one is exactly how you thought, and the do wrong to no one is more so like, if someone trusts her, she's not going to go behind their back, and she's not going to gossip about other's feelings or problems. though she's more than happy to tell about a funny event, ie; someone sat on a chair and it broke
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Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 1:42 pm
I agree with your assignment of her to Pitivo.
Check on this concept!
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