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Posted: Fri Oct 31, 2008 3:55 pm
I think evil is awesome. Especially when you see through the villanous characters eyes and understand the reasoning and philosophy that leads him to conclusions that seem to us as... well, evil. Thats why I want to make a short story about it. Im not necisarilly an author, but i still kind of like to write. Heres a begining ive been thinking about, and I absolutely accept critisism. ((I accept complements too))
You may be asking who is writing the page before you, so allow me to introduce myself. I am Lazarus of Transylvania. If you recognize my name, you know that I have many enemies. They do not understand my struggle, and only see what is on the surface. They do not understand that sometimes a life must be sacrificed in order to profit the world more than the individual’s life could have. I see that you are shocked that I even dare to say such a thing, but allow me to explain. Beware reader, for the next pages of my tale contain truth that you may not desire to hear! It contains proof of injustice and the general human races cruelty, the full capacity of despair, and what it truly means to be human. Allow me to begin with my birth witch cost the life of my mother. It was a dark, dreadfully cold winter night that penetrated even the stone palace walls that I was to spend my childhood in…
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Posted: Mon Jul 06, 2009 10:58 pm
wow, im impressed. im not sure about the names, but im really likeing the whole plot of it though. sounds like you have a good story on your hands. you really should consider finishing it, and maybe even trying to get it published. i really think you have talent. bravo.
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