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 Posted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 9:49 pm
lol.... yeah, aperantly I think of myself as a poet XD well if you like check them out ^^
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Posted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 9:53 pm
"Don'T"
Don't say you will,
If you never plan to start.
Never say forever,
Cause forever breaks my heart.
Don't say you love me,
Not if you don't really care.
And don't act like your sorry,
Cause that's more then I can bare.
Don't run around behind my back,
And lie straight to my face.
Because every time you do that,
You heart seems like a more unwelcome place.
Don't tell me what to do,
Not when I'm leaving you behind.
Stop feeding me these lies,
And trying to make me blind.
So don't say hello,
If you really mean goodbye.
And never say forever,
Cause forever makes me cry.
I wrote this one after a bad breakup where obviously he kept saying he loved me and didn't mean it. don't be surprised if I'm a little un-trusting because of it... ahh well I try to be as warm as I can ^^
anyway yeah, I don't remember exactly how long it's been since I wrote this one but it was... hmmm..... around Christmas of 2007 I believe. (so anywhere from Dec. 1 - Jan. 30?)
the title is don't because I'm telling him what not to do and the capital T is for Today and Tomorrow rather then yesterday ^^ hope that makes sense
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Posted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 9:56 pm
"sleepless"
I can't believe I miss you,
when all we did was fight.
but still I sit here waiting,
on this sleepless night.
I promised you forever,
you said it was a lie.
you kept trying to hurt me
and so I said goodbye.
Now I wait here alone,
waiting for the morning light.
because I know when that comes,
it ends the sleepless night.
I never edited this one XD
and yes, I'm a fan of the ones with 4 lines in a sonnet ^^ their the ones I'm good at writing, or couplets. anyway, I wrote this one when I started missing someone very much, now I don't miss them anymore because they're not the kind of person I want in my life... sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 11:44 am
"remembering you"
looking back at the time we spent
the time you took
the days we never had
you never thought to look
no, you never looked at me
never thought of others
only at yourself
never at your brother
he paniced that day,
the day you hit the floor
finding yourself at last,
knocking on deaths great door
I never got to see your eyes
you never looked back at me
so all I can remember...
was the day you silenced your plea
alright, this one was rather uninspired. basically I had a friend who was suicidal, no, he didn't have a brother just a really close friend who was a guy. a week before he attempted suicide he wouldn't look at anyone, and became really quiet, but for some reason he never looked at me. I could still talk to him, but I don't.
and yes, he did survive this. this is one of my.... I dunno, it only took me like 2 minutes to write it, it's really uninspired in my opinion.
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