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Poetry is what gets lost in translation ~Robert Frost~ 

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LunarHybrid
Captain

PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 6:54 pm


Song after song
I wonder how vocalists are able to
Sing out their feelings,
Remember the heart ache,
The years lost to stubborn fighting,
Wreck less nights of satisfaction
And the hearts left behind only
To break open upon the rocks below
As they rise above
To watch in horror.

Line after line
Is sung from the speakers about
The heart break I've caused
Many who've fallen for me,
Yet as I struggle,
Becoming more and more confused,
I remain unable to describe
How much I wish to mend their scars
For I bleed the same,
My heart aching to hide my own feelings,
Yet I have no words to describe
How sorry I am for the choices
I have made.

Word after word
Echo's through my mind
Piercing deep into my soul,
Begging for a chance -
Something I fear to offer.
No words could offer a description
Of the suffering
From months of pushing and shoving,
Ripping through many hearts at once.

So here I think
Of a wordless description
To show the one I chose for eternity
How I could possibly still have room for him.
But there is no description
To prove how much I love him...


Just a poem about the guys I love and the pain we've all been through but how I chose my recent boyfriend over them because of how much more he has to offer as a person, a friend, and in his heart for me; and how I can't describe to my BF how important he really is.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 7:05 pm


das ist gut ja? du hast ein potential!!!

Tseko the Living Shadow


LunarHybrid
Captain

PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 8:58 pm


xd all I got out of that is 'potential'
PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 10:33 pm


I like it and its very sweet. I've never been able to understand how someone would really love more than one person in a romantic way at the same time. Mainly because I've never been in that situation, I just don't see how I could be. When I have love for a girl its usually strong enough to block out the thoughts of anyone else. Just speculating. Not insulting, putting down, or saying you're weird. Just speculating. ^.^

Scazarith
Crew


LunarHybrid
Captain

PostPosted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 11:16 am


LOL don't worry I understand completely. Its not that I'm in love with them, love them romantically or even think of them in that way. I just have stronger feelings for certain guy friends because of past relationships and cant figure out what to do about it other than try to move on.
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