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PostPosted: Mon Oct 27, 2008 7:45 pm


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In this event, you'll be competing for THIS scary fellow by Rapid:

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HERE'S HOW IT WORKS:

You tell me a scary story. It can be based off of RL events, a folklore you've heard, ANYTHING! Looking for creativity points though, so if you google and copy paste some random ghost story, that won't cut it! It needs to be in your own words, and try to keep it unique!

The story that captivates the judges the most will win the Scary Story Contest!


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PostPosted: Mon Oct 27, 2008 10:10 pm


The New Jack B. Nimble

“Hey Jess, we still got that date tonight?”

“Of course Jack.” She said, smiling at the boy standing in front of him. He was so adorable with that goofy smile, those blue eyes and that mop top. “Seven, at the old Ficara Studios building.”

“The Tower District, right?” He asked, getting a nod from the beautiful girl standing in front of him. Everything about her was just perfect in his eyes: her rich brown eye, her shimmering blond hair, and her perfect white teeth, encompassed by brilliant, naturally red lips.

“See you then.” She giggled, quickly kissing his cheek, and hurrying off to her sixth period. Jack just stood there, rubbing his cheek. He was pretty damn lucky, if he should say so himself. He was snapped out of reality when the tardy bell rang, causing him to curse and flee to the Art room.

“Jack, you’re late. Again.” Mr. Sayer, the art teacher at Herbert Hoover High told his student, giving a small sigh. He couldn’t get too angry, though. Jack did have a high grade. And he was one of the most talented in the class. Even though his work did tend to be a bit… macabre.

“Sorry, Sayer.” Jack said, rubbing the back of his head sheepishly. Mr. Sayer just rolled his eyes, sighed, and went on to explain the rest of the assignment.
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“Hey there.” Jessica smiled, taking Jack’s face into her hands and planting a quick kiss on his mouth. Jack smiled, and returned the favor, proceeding to grab her hand.

“Ready?” She asked, him nodding in response. Clutching each other’s digits, they walked into the old building.

“So…you know the legends about this place, right? They say every All Hollow’s Eve the spirit of a serial killer appears to those unfortunate enough to come across his path.” Jack whispered hauntingly into his girlfriend’s ear. She gave a little laugh, and pushed him away.

“You and me both know that ghosts don’t exist, Jack.” She giggled, walking deeper into the studio.

“I know; I was just trying to scare you.” He laughed, running to catch up with his girlfriend.

They talked about meaningless things as the walked deeper into the studio, things like who was going to win the election, which bands were doing what, and the names they would pick fro their future children. They laughed, giggled, chortled, and sometimes snorted at their petty conversations, until they reached the back wall.
“Well, here we are. The deepest level of Ficara Studios, and still no ghosties.” Jessica teased, giving Jack a light push on the shoulder. Jack remained silent, only rolling his eyes. Jessica took out a camera, and wrapper her arm around Jack’s waist, extending her other arm to full length, and snapping a picture of the two. She laughed at Jack’s grunt of displeasure. He did always hate pictures.

Jess looked at the recent picture and gasped, dropping it. She ran quickly, leaving Jack behind. When she escaped Ficara, gasping for breath, she was on the verge of tears. Ghosts didn’t exist…they didn’t. But…what was that thing that was over Jack?

Jack shivered, it had suddenly drooped about twenty degrees. He zipped up his hoodie, and began to walk to the exit. All the while, he could feel something following him. A manic pair of eyes was boring a whole into his neck; he could feel it. He put the hood up, to feel a bit safer. But it didn’t help.

About half way to the exit, he heard a shrill little voice singing, “Jack be nimble, Jack be quick. Jack jump over the candlestick!” It cackled in laughter, and soon, Jack saw what it was talking about. A large oil spill, not there before, was in front of him, and a lit match was hovering in mid air, ready to fall on it.

“Can Jackie make it? I don’t know. His own body can he throw?” It cackled again, the match dropping. The oil was quickly alight, blocking his, and the flames licking at his legs.

“Jack be nimble, Jack be quick. Jack jump into the candle stick.” It sang, a chilly echo ringing through the building. Jack stared at the fire as it drew closer to him. Then he realized; the oil was surrounding him.

“Happy Halloween~” The voice sang, as Jack’s desperate eyes grew wider in fear. Jack jumped, not so nimble, and not quick enough, out of the oil candlestick. His body came out burned, charred, and black, a long gash was upon his back. The Pumpkin King’s head rested on Jack’s crown, sinking Jack ever deeper down. Down to the darkness where the devil resides, only to sit at poor Jack’s sides. Jack the Student became Jack the King, now all he needed was his Queen. So he raised the forces of Hell to bring her down, and she too bore the crown. So the moral of this story is, don’t go into deserted building kids.


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PostPosted: Mon Oct 27, 2008 10:28 pm


This story originated when I was in high school. We were shown a copy of 'The Scream' and told to write a short story based on that which would be due the next day. That night the power went out as I struggled to write in the dark about this odd piece of art. The following is a derivation of that writting.


A Ghost Story


A flash of sunlight gleams off the blade of a knife as it descends into the waiting flesh of an over ripe tomato. Mouth watering, Abby stacks her toast high with tomatoes, bacon and lettuce. It is the perfect day for a picnic. Still early enough in fall that the air was crisp but still pleasant and a soft breeze rustled the brilliant leaves of the nearby trees.

Listening to the honking call of passing geese, Abby finishes her sandwich. But such a day is too nice not to enjoy and a few passing geese found the park’s pond a nice rest. Taking a few slices of bread, she goes and tosses pieces into the pond, watching the geese and the few native ducks swim around for them.

As a beautiful sunset paints the sky in brilliant colors, Abby realizes how late it has gotten and quickly gathers her things. Slinging her backpack over her shoulder, she sets off for the short walk home.

Slightly less than a mile, it was only the area around Allen Creek that she worried about. The close pressing trees would block the sunlight and the ground was sometimes slick with loose rocks to create hazards.

Abby thinks of crossing the bridge instead of taking the foot path over the creek, the water wasn’t deep enough this time of year to be an issue, but the bridge was an old wooden, one lane affair that had no places for a pedestrian to flee should a car come across.

Her thoughts are distracted as she passes Peter’s house. The cutest boy in the entire school, Abby’s thoughts turn to fantasies of the school dance and Peter asking her out. Of course, Abby knew it wouldn’t happen, he didn’t know she was alive. But she could dream.

As Abby walks along, approaching Allen’s Creek Bridge, lost in thought, the dusk shadows long before her, a flash of light on the bridge startles her from her revere. Looking up to see the source of the glimmer, Abby notices two figures on the bridge speaking in hushed tones.

One man is on his knees in front of the other. Dressed in an old tweed jacket and tan slacks, his hands stretched behind his back as tears flow down his cheeks. He appears to be speaking, but Abby can not understand his words.

The other man stands, his face cold and expressionless. The last of the sunlight filtering through the trees with an eerie red glow etching his sharp features as he looks down at the man in the tweed jacket. His eyes seem to glint with contempt at the tears. Dressed in faded old jeans and a brown leather jacket his long legs are lean and his well muscled arms reach to mid-thigh. The source of the brief glint is grasped in one of his immense hands.

Abby stands in muted shock. She knows nothing of guns, except to fear them.

The man with the gun shakes his head in response to something the tweed jacket man says and slowly raises the weapon. Squeezing the trigger once in a controlled fashion, no hint of humanity upon his face, he releases one bullet into the other man. The tweed jacket blooms a brilliant red flower and the man cries out in surprise and pain before toppling over into Allen’s Creek.

Abby stands in shock for a moment, then, as the creek flows red, she wonders who is screaming. The man with the gun turns to face her and Abby realizes it is her voice, sounding strange and high, which she is hearing. She watches in horror as a look of cold determination focuses on her.

Turning and running into the only cover available, Abby takes the path into the trees and down to the creek. Hearing the crashing of the man following behind her she doesn’t take the trail back out of the creek bed but instead and turns up stream.

Thinking of her childhood exploring, Abby knows that while the creek is low here, there is a beaver’s dam just a little ways away past which the water is deeper. She hopes that if she follows the creek the man will lose her trail.

Before long her breath start to come in ragged gasps as her legs tingle with adrenalin and exertion. Stumbling in the creek, Abby rights herself, wet and cold, but unharmed. Pausing she takes a moment to breath, ragged gasps from a throat raw with screaming and cold air. Listening Abby notices the sounds of her pursuit are distant and faint, but she knows she can’t afford to slow down.

As the full dark of a moonless night settles over the forest, Abby again moves upstream.

Nearing the beaver’s den, Abby leaves the creek, her feet now numbed by the cold water, and moves to walk around the dam. The roots of the overhanging trees reach up to catch her feet in the dark and several more times Abby stumbles and falls, her hands and knees scraped raw.

Circling back into the water on the other side of the dam, Abby shivers, this slower moving water being even colder. And with it deeper, it now laps over and into her shoes, plastering her pants to her legs.

Shivering courses through her body as she walks, making it hard for her to see, and even harder for her to walk. Stumbling down the creek, Abby doesn’t see the deep hole in the creek bed. A stumbling step forward and her foot sinks into the cavity, unsteady rocks falling from the surrounding creek bed and onto her ankle, trapping her foot.

Abby feels a sharp pain stab though her leg as she tries to move forward. Fumbling at the rocks around her ankle, Abby cuts her finger even further, blood quickly becoming one with the creek’s water. It takes an eternity of moments before Abby is able to pull her foot from the hole, leaving her shoe behind.

The sounds of her pursuer closer now, Abby knows she must move on without it.

Her ankle weakened by the event, she now stumbles even more often as it fails to hold her weight, though the cold waters keep it too numb to feel as the rocks of the creek bed cut into her foot. Drenched and frozen, Abby begins to escape the cold as a warm euphoria encompasses her.

Abby forgets the reason she is running, forgets the fear and pain. Only wanting to rest, to lie down and sleep, she begins to move towards the nearer bank of the creek.

Hearing a strange sloshing sound behind her, Abby’s mind tries to process what is happening, but is unable to connect anything with reality. Collapsing at the side of the creek, she closes her eyes to dream.

A growl sounds in her dream and she feels the hot breath of a wolf for a moment before her hair is roughly grabbed, jerking her up. “Girl, don’t think you’re gonna get away that easy.” The man in the leather jacket is pulling his gun from it’s holster in one hand while the other holds Abby up by her hair.

Fear fills her eyes as the memories of the night’s horror flood back, “Please, don’t . . .”

Grunting, he aims his gun at Abby’s heart. As he pulls the trigger she gasps, then closes her eyes again, swallowing the prayer on her lips.

Bright colors explode in her eyes; Abby remembers everything in a brief flash. She remembers her second birthday party, her first day in school, the day she got an A on her history exam, the day her father died . . .

Abby remembers her life as she floats in darkness, until softly, slowly, the world refocuses around her.

It wasn’t cold anymore as Abby woke up. Getting to her feet, her ankle supporting her and pain free. Her hand, too, free of cuts and abrasions. Remembering everything so vividly, she wondered at the dream she had awakened from and why she was so deep into the woods. Abby shook her head and started towards home. Taking one glance back, she paused, for there, laying half in the creek, was a body of a young girl. A body with blood splattered from a hole in the middle of it’s chest. A body that looked a lot like Abby.

Abby shook her head, she must be imagining things. Once again she turned from the clearing. Mother will know what this dream means, Abby thinks as she starts for home.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 6:01 am


I know this story may sound like I made it up, but I swear, its totally true! We were in a very small town. sweatdrop

Ok, so when I was just a kid, about 11 or 12 years old, I was on a trip with my dad. We were coming back to Virginia after a trip to Florida. We had stopped in this small town to get something to drink and go to the bathroom. While we were in this little convenience store, there were these two guys who were giving the clerk a hard time, because she wasn't American and didn't speak English very well. My dad has always been one to stand up to people, so he told the guys, "Hey, leave her alone. She's doing the best she can." He was answered with mean glares. We bought our stuff and left, my dad's arm around my shoulder. I could tell he was nervous.

So we got into the car and made our way back to the main road...which wasn't much in this small town. My dad suddenly looks into the rear view mirror and curses. "S***, they're following us. Don't be scared, Sara, I'm just going to try and get away from them. So hold on." He started driving faster and took a turn down a smaller road. I was clinging to my seat, scared out of my mind. Why were these people following us?

And then I heard the gunshot. My dad screamed at me to get down on the floor. I did as I was told and tucked myself in the space under the dashboard in the front seat. I looked up at my dad and the fright in his face was enough to make me cry out of fear myself. I crouched down as low as I could as I heard another gunshot. I was crying my eyes out, thinking that my father and I were about to die.

But then I heard the greatest sound I could ask for at that moment. A siren. The gunmen were pulled over and arrested. My father and I were escorted out of town by three police cars after all the details had been worked out. We never went back there, except for the trial.

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 6:16 am


This is a story that I was originally told by my art teacher, he enjoyed spooking out the entire class, I am not sure I will do it justice as he was very ‘animated’, but here we go…. either way I am going to pass it on, just like stories are intended.

Soquili’s name: Fable

Secrets in the Darkness

It was a cold and gloomy night, just like all those since they had arrived at their new foster home. The walls were coated in antiques and other old things that were not much fun for playing with. Yet with every creak of the wooden walls as the wild wind howled towards them there was a strange eerie feel. The oil lamps flickered, leaving a murky yellow ambiance to settle upon the interior. The two children huddled on the bed; they knew the house rules yet something about them seemed strange. Why would anyone foster children and then not allow them to touch anything at all, disallow them to run and play, no laughter had been emitted from their mouths in days, just the shallow breath of defeat.

Yet children being children a strange curiosity had flooded over them earlier in the day as they explored every inch of the house, the corridors were spindly and thin, the objects grabbing and tugging at their clothes in an desperate attempt to slow them down. The stairs creaked, and the floor rattled with each step, yet as their exploration continued they had discovered a set of old half-rotted stairs, blackened by dirt and softened by time. There was a small plague that read "do not enter" hanging beside them, but despite that they crawled up the narrow staircase, each step a challenge as the wood sunk below their touch. Finally they reached a black room, paint peeling and the only light spilling into the room was from a sliver of a stained yellow window situated in the far end of the room. It was dusty and unkempt unlike the rest of the house. It was somehow out of place, a taboo within the house itself. Fear prickled their necks as their eyes frantically scanned the surroundings. It seemed empty bar a small metal hinged door in the far corner.

Step by step they approached. Hearts beating in a whirled frenzy. Thump, thump, thump. Their steps making pattering noises upon the ground. Nearing the door they froze, pausing for a brief moment to examine it. It seemed plain, yet there was a hidden elegance about it, the soft gilded design all but worn away, and the cooper handle tarnished by time itself.

Being the braver of the two the brother stepped forward, his dainty hands reached forward, heart still racing as he touched the cold lonely metal, it stung with a sharpness he did not recognise. Turning, slowly, he waited. It did not open. Tugging at it, it still didn’t open. Again and again he tried but the door did not budge. A wave of disappointment spread over him as he turned to walk away, his sisters’ eyes still watching the door.

A soft creaking came from behind it, a scrapping noise. Frozen the brother turned. His sisters eyes wide with freight, their hearts pausing in terror as they stopped and starred. They door would not shift before yet here it was, moving, and on its own. The door spilled open, inch by inch the crack got wider, inch by inch their fear increased, inch by inch there hearts began to race. Until finally they saw it, three thin bony fingers, they curled around the edge of the door revealing long curled fingernails, wriggling and moving as if possessed by the demons of hell themselves.

They ran, thundering through the house as fast as they could in an attempt to reach their bedroom once more, their safety net. That is were our story began, curled up on the bed, eyes wide with freight as they watched the door in hellish panic. It did not move, it did not creak; it did not make a sound. The house was all but still.

Sleep washed over them as they desperately attempted to suppress the evening’s events.

Scraping fingers ripped at the door like nails on a blackboard, an eerie sound that travelled towards them as they woke with a sudden jump of fright. Yet as suddenly as it had started it stopped, almost instantly, as if it had never started to begin with yet as the sun rose filling the house with a bleak light they ventured forth. Edging out towards the hallway they noted the scrapings on the floor and marks left in the wooden door. It had not been a dream; they had awoken something from deep within the bowels of the house. Sweat began to pour as they ran down the stairs, the stern face of their foster father standing before them as his voice erupted from his mouth "no running in my house, now back to bed with you both." Hesitation filled them as they did as instructed, but slowly they returned to the small slice of sanctuary.

The walls of the room caving in around them, their very own prison cell.

The day passed quickly and night settled upon the house once more.

Scraping fingers sounded through the air waking them both once more. Thump, thump, thump, their hearts did race. Bump, bump, bump, the sounds did ache. As they jumped to their feet and slammed open the door. No figure of darkness stood before them, yet the marks had dug deeper still. Panic poured over them like an icy glove. They could not explain these deeds.

Their eyes flickering in fear as the looked around, noting the silence that drifted through the house bar for the mellow glow that emanated from the floor below. Cautiously they crept down the stairs so not to disturb the other creatures of the night. Hearts racing and blood pumping. Whispered voices reached them. Painful. Their hearts beating faster and faster. Thump, thump, thump. Tap, tap, tap.

The whispers spoke their endless words, "Tonight we shall kill them," it paused, a sound that sniffed at the air echoed throughout the otherwise silent house, children with held breath waited. "We shall eat their brains first." A shrill laugh vibrated towards them, shortly followed by the tinker of metal clashing together. The children panicked once more, was this where the creature had gone?

A figure began to move in the lit room, its breath raspy, its step somehow laboured with difficulty as it approached. The children watched, hearts racing, panic looming, breath tight. The figure moved closer, face covered in darkness. A flicker of light emerged, it sprawled violently across the side of the figures face revealing it features, his features, the features of their foster father. Yet before they could calm their minds the flicker of light revealed yet another secret, the blade held tight in his hand shone in its evil magnificence. It was he who intended to kill them.

Taking flight they ran, yet with nowhere to run they headed towards the bedroom. As they loomed closer, the shadowy figure ever behind them, they saw an eerie sight, the shadowy hand from before hung from the ceiling above and a ghostly voice drifted towards them. "Hide! He will catch you, like he caught my brother."

That was the truth of such a strange man, he was a murderer preying on the innocent. Changing direction they ran, back towards the darkened stairs with the single wooden door inside. They needed to escape, they needed to live.

To this day it is unsure what happened to these children, or if they ever managed to escape such a horrible fate.

So the only question that remains is, do you know where I can find them?
PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 11:14 am


My little ditty <3

A Strange Exchange:

I met a fellow
Dressed in yellow
Promising me his heart

Though in exchange
I had to give my soul and some small change
I laugh and proclaim, ”What a lark!”

So I sign my name
With blood from my vein
Then on my head is a glowing red mark

Then the man spears his fingers into his chest
And his heart comes out in eternal rest
And suddenly my vision goes dark

When I come to
I see nothing I can do
For the place I am is not on a chart

I scream out my fears
Till I am reduced to tears
When looking at my lap I say, “At least I have his heart.”

And just so you know, Coal
Is the color of my chest hole
And now hell is the home I am part

Miroke


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PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 12:07 pm


The Horror of White Lick Creek


The year was 1907. The industrial revolution was booming and the race to connect the United States together by railroad was clipping along at a dizzying pace. White Lick Creek was a very calm sedate piece of land in Indiana, until the workers at the Inter-Urban Railroad company began to build across its banks.

It was unbearably hot. But August could be brutal like that, and it was to be expected. The workers began hammering wood together at a feverish pace. The first order of business was, of course, to build the forms so they could pour the concrete for the massive tresses. Little by little wood was added. Sections were stacked on top of one another and nailed in place. The shadows were slowly beginning to disappear as the crew reached noon.

Before their lunch break two workers, one who’s name was lost to history, and the kindly man known as “Dad” Jones wanted to pour the concrete in one of the tresses’ forms so they would have less to do later. “Dad” was six feet five inches, the strongest man among the crew. He and his friend climbed the wooden form and fought with the heavy bucket.

”Woah! Easy, easy…steady.” Dad boomed to his colleague as they fought to steady the bucket over the form, arms extended to hold it in place. Even with the crane’s help it was dangerous, manual labour. “Okay…coax it over.” He coached. The men began to tip the bucket and concrete fell with a sickening squishing sound as it was held in shape by the form. The boards underfoot began to creak and groan, but the men weren’t easily spooked and kept working. The boards gave way moments later and Dad’s friend was thrown behind the tress. Dad let out a hoarse cry of surprise before he stumbled forward and fell into the form. There was no one to tip the bucket so it would stop pouring cement.

Dad Jones struggled like mad, his large fists pounding a frantic crescendo against the form. The rest of the concrete was poured, sealing him forever in his unnatural tomb. According to the railroad foreman the incident, “happened far too quickly for anything to be done”. The railroad was unwilling to stop construction for a temporary worker.

Some of the men objected saying the spirit of the man would not rest until he was given a proper burial, but the officials scoffed at the notion and the work continued. The finished railway had been made successfully and the remaining workers were lauded. The memory of what had happened to Dad Jones soon faded from everyone’s memories.

Until the screaming began.

A farmer was the first to notice. As he headed home from a long night of hunting he passed the railroad tracks. A train chugged along the rail, it passed over the first of the tresses, he swore a scream rang out above the sound of the speeding locomotive. He had said that the sound seemed to be coming from inside the bridge itself. Of course, no one believed him.

The story intensified when a group of teenagers had parked near the railroad for a moonlit snogging session. The train rattled their cars and as the train passed over it seemed the bridge was oozing sweat. With the train disrupting the kids they noticed the odd phenomenon on the bridge. A few of them bolstered the courage and went to get a better look. To their horror the ooze was the colour of blood.

It is said that even today, if you go to visit the tracks over White Lick Creek, you can hear the screaming as a train passes or see the blood oozing from the very foundation at night.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 2:35 pm


There is no hope


The night started off as any other in a sleepy suburb as the sun dipped below the horizon and mothers called to their children to return home. Reluctantly they obeyed and soon the streets were empty of life, but something still was amiss. The air was unnaturally still, the darkness that descended upon the unsuspecting neighborhood foreboding. The late autumn leaves that still clung to the trees rustled restlessly, whispers of evil upon the stale air.

“Bobby!” cried a mother, realizing her son was absent. She called and called, looking frantically out the front door and down both sides of the silent street. She heard the cries of Bobby’s friends’ mothers also and suddenly grew angry, thinking her son was disobeying his curfew with his friends. She spotted the group suddenly as they came running down the street, flailing their arms and yelling something she couldn’t make out.

A rumble started, low at first but gradually increasing until the very ground trembled in fear. The woman ducked down as the houses shook and belongings were sent crashing to the floor. As suddenly as it started, the rumbling passed, as though some great beast had exhaled and now was hushed. Tentatively did the she rise to leave her home, only to find that everywhere she looked was a thick cloud of black mist that reeked of death and rotting flesh. Sputtering and coughing did she stumble through, unaware of her surroundings. All she wanted was to find Bobby, but the air was deathly quiet.

Again the rumbling, this time louder and more violent and she was thrown to the ground, clutching at her head and crying out in confusion and fear. Muffled screams could be heard through the thick cloud, and then moist thuds here and there. Her head was throbbing, the rumbling and the smell all around her made her nauseous. She crawled on her belly, calling out to Bobby, but no answer came.

She crawled through the fog, taking no notice of the thick, fetid juices that were soaking the ground. The rumbling continued, seeming to get louder as it neared her. The smell of decay increased as a hot wind kicked up behind her. Fearful, she scrambled to her feet and ran away from the thing pursuing her. She heard its awful footfalls behind her, rumbling the ground and shaking her to the core. In her frenzied state she ran headlong into something… moist. She pushed off of the thing that reached out to claim her. Its eyes were lifeless and bleeding, its clammy skin seemed too pale and covered in so much blood. Worse yet was the familiarity in its features, human yet not. She knew this creature, she was sure. She shrieked, wrestling to get free of it, its hot breath sickening her. It growled at her, hissing and revealing to her its unnatural fangs. Tears welled in her eyes as it held her in its supernatural grip. The face was of her son, but it was not her Bobby!

She beat against the creature desperately, but her pursuer seemed to have reached her as well. She chanced a glance behind as the rumbling footfalls came to a head and the hot breath of damnation blew down her neck. “Wha.. what’s happening,” she sobbed, gaping at the creature that stepped out of the black mist to leer at her. It seemed to have a face as black as night with eyes burning like the fires of Hell. Horns like a ram’s twisted back and around to the front of the creature, whose body was pierced with many differently sized barbs that made the creature bleed eternally. Great leathery wings stretched behind the satyr-like creature and it stood no shorter than ten feet tall. It loomed over the woman, sneering at her.

“I have come for your soul,” it laughed, its voice booming in the blackness. The woman’s eyes widened in disbelief as she shook her head slowly. “I have done nothing wrong! I am a good woman! I go to church…” She stammered, thinking she had died and the devil had come for her. The demon shook its head, its laughter nearly deafening. “That is why I have come,” it growled, leaning down, reaching for her with its terrible, curving claws. They pierced her shoulder and she gasped in pain and confusion as the creature batted the creature that had been Bobby away with the flick of its free wrist. Bobby’s body flew off into the mist beyond the woman’s vision, obviously lifeless. “Why am I being punished?!” she cried as the demon latched onto her with its other clawed hand. It laughed at her as it brought its face down to hers, opening its mouth wide to show all of its razor teeth. “The pure souls taste the best,” it chuckled as it clamped it maw down on her face to feast.

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 3:34 pm


The Hotel Guest


The rumor had spread all over the hotel, the guest who had been recently staying in room number ten was dead. All the clues were there, the police coming in and out of the front doors at all hours, the door to room ten closed off to everyone. Mary Yavk, staying in room fourteen was shaken, but not as much, for she didn't know the man. Nervously, she scampered back to her room and locked the regular lock and the dead bolt. Her night's sleep was filled with dark dreams and tossing and turning.

The next morning she awoke to screaming and terrified shouts of help. The guest in room eleven had been killed. Mary ran out of her room and into a tall man dressed in a dark coat. He was holding a wallet. Mary shrank away, she could tell this man meant bad business. Catching a glimpse of the name on the wallet, she said, "I'm sorry Mr. Knepshield." The man took no notice of her, and turned away. She shuddered, and asked a nearby guest who had died. The returning whisper said the name was John Knepshield. Mary's mouth opened and closed. She was scared, then just figured that the scary man must be John Knepshields brother or something. She went to bed, and had more strange dreams, this time about the man walking into room eleven holding the wallet. She woke up with sweat dripping down her body, and screamed herself when she heard someone shout, "The guest in room twelve is dead!"

She sprinted out of her room, and looked down the hallway. The strange man was standing in front of the door of room twelve, holding a wallet. Mary edged up from behind him, and saw the name on the wallet. The man turned and Mary shuddered with fear, the look on his face was that of a crazed person. He said slowly and grimly, "I am Adin Burns." Mary nodded and backed away. She whispered to another guest, "Who died?" The answer was Adin Burns. Mary gaped, and was now very scared. She ran to her room and dreamed again of the strange man stealing a wallet, reading the name, and turning to her, saying, 'I am Mary Yavk'

Mary woke up in the middle of the night and sprinted to the room next door, room thirteen. She shook the woman sleeping in the bed and screamed at her, "He's coming for you! He already stole your wallet! He thinks he's you! HE WILL KILL YOU!!!" She was dragged out by security guards and thrown in her room. She paced, and waited until the screams of morning she knew would come.

"THE GUEST IN ROOM THIRTEEN IS DEAD!!!" Mary yelled as she stood terrified, in the doorway of room thirteen, "SHE IS DEAD!" She whirled around at the sound of footsteps, and saw the man behind her. She screamed, and ran back to her room. She grabbed her own wallet and opened it, her drivers license was gone. He would come for her tonight. Mary screamed and grabbed her wallet. She needed to run, to leave, he would be coming.

Five years later, she had changed her name, her address, even her profession. Every night she was haunted by the names of the people who died. She had the wallet locked in a safe, because she knew if the man found it he would kill her, and she knew he was searching for her. It had to end.


The woman formerly known as Mary Yavk dug a hole in her yard in the dead of the night, a deep hole, so deep the bottom was black as pitch. She pulled the wallet out of her pocket, and felt a presence behind her. Slowly, ever so slowly, she turned around, and the man stood behind her. He looked at the open wallet in her hand, then at the drivers license in his.

Her lifeless body fell into the pit she had dug herself, and the drivers license followed, fluttering down to lay on the woman's still chest.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 4:58 pm


it was like any other late night and it was around 1:30am in the morning. the phone rings a couple time, and come to out minutes later my mother had to drive her bf to work right then. i offered to go with since it was really late and i figured my mother wouldnt wanna drive back home alone. so the three of use got into the mustang, dropped him off then went on back home. we arrived to the street we had to take to get down to our block where our house is. you'd think at 2am in the morning their'd be no cars down the street but oh now some strange car was traveling down the road at like 5 miles per hour or less. seeing as that was rather strange when the speed limit was much higher than that, what was more odd was when we passed the car we noticed the guy eyeing our car and hhe sped up and went right into the nearest block he could turn into. now we ofcourse got freaked out a bit, well more than just a little freaked and headed home as fast as we could, ran into the house and locked it up. xD;; and this is why i never want to go out and about late at night regardless of if im in a car or not.

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Thalea

Devoted Mage

PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 5:19 pm


Actually, this was a dream I had, with a few changes xD
Well, here it goes ^.^

Ephemeral Life

There are many worlds that are parallel to ours, mirrors of our being, our world in different times. The world that I want to tell you about tonight is a world that has spent many years in torment, a world that is covered by mist. The living creatures that inhabit this planet have moved to cower inside thick stone walled structures. The dark haze outside the walls only brought death, no one dared to enter the fog, but alas, this is where the story beings. Two brave souls left the protection of the others to confront the Evil. This is the legend of Anabelle and Cian.

~`'`~

Thick mist rolled in, surrounding the small buildings of the city. Living in this mist were monsters beyond your wildest dreams, Blood suckers that would turn to dust if light touched their skin, hungry plants that would poison any breathing creature with one touch, giant bugs that burrow into your flesh, to eat you from the inside out. Humans hide, never daring to enter the dark swirling cloud, fearing for their lives.
But two did not cower or hide, they left the sanctuary to fight the fear that the others faced. The woman, Anabelle, entered the mist first, crafty in mind, swift with a sword. Soon after, a man followed, Cian, who was strong in build, brave in heart. Together they walked, weapons strapped to their backs, they searched for the source of evil that lay siege on the world.
Vines reached, trying to entangle, wanting to pull them into the dark abyss of perdition, only to be cut down by Anabelle’s sudden attack with her silver sword. Creatures of the Night follow close behind, looking for any flaw, any weakness, a slight stumble, preparing for attack.

Death awaits the two brave heroes will they submit to his evil will or conquer?

The Dark King, sat, for the two that dare deny his reign, his palace looming over the once peaceful land. Our two heroes arrived at his door as the clock struck twelve. The peal echoed out into the empty night, the dirge filled the heroes’ ears. They knew then that if they took another step forward, it would be their death. Never backing down in defeat, the two marched on, the great hall stretched out before them.
A dark figure, with long flowing robes, with hair to match the color of his soul and a length to match his age, sat regally upon a throne of human sculls. “You have come to face your death, how do you pitiful humans believe you can defeat me? My people are both more strong and brave. Prepare to die.”
The battle was great, many demons where slain by the two, but sadly, the human body could take so much. Anabelle fell first, twenty blood suckers dead at her feet. Next fell Cian, with only one less.
“Take their bodies and show the pitiful humans! We will have a feast to celebrate our victory! Go get the prisoners!” The Dark King let out an evil laugh, making his followers shudder.
The sky glowed red, showing the humans that they have lost against the predators that haunted them or had they?
The Creatures of the Night have seen what a human heart was capable of, so if more, instead of two, rose up against them, who knows what the out come will be?

~`'`~

Dear listener, it is said, that you can still hear the echo of Anabella and Cian when the night is dark and silent, fighting for their lives and that of all the living creatures on the planet called Earth.
PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 5:32 pm


This entry is based off of a year or two ago, when our Youth Group went to the cemetary for the halloween message, and we played Hide and Seek tag, I think it was... Some of the younger kids - as well as some of the older ones - kept seeing 'white people' and were getting really freaked out.(Names have been changed)

Teresa crouched beside a bush, giggling as Judy shushed her.
"Do you want to be the first ones found?" the other girl asked, managing to get a tone of anger in her voice, though a wide grin betrayed her true excitement. Already, the person who was It had walked past their hiding spot three times without an inkling that they were there.

Suddenly a shrill scream came from across the graveyard. Teresa and Judy had to stifle their giggles.
"That sounds like Mikki," Teresa gasped, her voice rising a bit louder than it should have, "only she would get so seriously freaked out over a game."

In one motion, the two middle-school girls peered through the bushes, nearly laughing when they spotted the screaming, moving shape of Mikki, who was running among the tombstones, followed by a figure in white.

Suddenly, Judy's laughs grew slower.
"Hey, Teresa?" she asked, her grin fading to a weak smile, "wasn't Jon It? And we was wearing dark clothes... We all were... Because we knew we'd be playing this, right? So... Who is that?"

Teresa's giggles faltered for a moment, then began again even louder than before.
"It's probably just a friend of the youth pastor, dressed up to scare us," she brushed off Judy's question with an easy explanation, "and Mikki would be the type to fall for it."

They squinted through the shrubs once more when they realized that the screaming had stopped. Mikki and the figure in white were no longer visible.
"Mikki must have gotten tagged, and now she's helping to find other people," Judy whispered. She looked up in surprise when Teresa began to stand up.

"Time to change our hiding place, Judy," Teresa grinned.

They ran doubled over behind the bushes that surrounded the graveyard, twice nearly tripping. Suddenly something erupted out of a bush, tackling both girls and throwing them to the ground.

"Gotcha!" Jon grinned in triumph, oblivious to the twigs caught in his jacket and hair. After a moment of protest, both girls submitted, following Jon as they searched for other youth-groupers. As the walked, Teresa asked Jon about the figure in white.

"I didn't see anything like that," he whispered with a puzzled frown, "I did hear Mikki screaming though. I figured she'd gotten a bug in her hair or something. By that point I was already in the bush, and I didn't want to crawl out and then have to go back in; it was hard enough the first time. So, I didn't go see what had happened for sure."

Suddenly he made a sharp turn, back into the main area of the graveyard.
"Thought I heard something," he whispered in response to the girls' assault of questions. He stopped short, causing Judy and Teresa to collide with his back.

"Hey! What'd you do that for?" Judy whispered angrily.

Jon pointed a shaking finger in response. There on the ground in front of them lay a twisted, mangled body, only vaguely recognizable as Mikki. She was dead.

Teresa looked out across the graveyard, trying not to be sick, and her eyes landed on a figure in white, standing near the gates, watching them...

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Hatsumigirl

PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 5:46 pm


((This is a true that my mom told me.))

The Voodoo Doll

My friends mother back in the early 80's. She made this voodoo doll. It was for my friends dad's new girlfriend. At first we thought she had gone crazy. But my friend's mother had made this voodoo doll. The girlfriend tried to shoot my friend's dad. Then she ran off. We found out she had gone back home. Then my friend's mother pulled on the voodoo doll's leg. Then the girl friend called saying she had broke her leg. Then her mother put up the doll. After the girlfriend stop talking to her dad. She had forgotton about the doll. Then two or three years later weird things begin to happen. You have to take the doll about from the last part to the first part.This went on for 2 years. My friend lived out in the country. There was 2 trailers on the property. One of the trailers was set straight and the other set across with abig yard. In the back of that trailer was these woods. Well we would always here weird noises outside and inside. All the family and friends had seen things out the back window of the trailer house. Big and small figures. Well the nite I saw one of the figures. Me and my friend had come to pick up something at both houses. No One else was around so my friend went into the first house. Then she procedes over to the trailer house that has the big area of grass. I was still setting in the car. I saw my friend turn the light out at the house. Then next thing you know she was running. i happened to over at the left side of the trailer. Here comes this thing about 5 to 6 feet tall. It had red eyes and was running to catch up with my friend. I put the car in reverse. she jump in the car. We took off and we never looked back She asked me did you see that thing. She said it was standing up right and was running like a person. She said it had long fangs also . I don't know I just saw the figure and those red eyes and that awful screeching. Well the next day we told her mother. She said she thought that the voodoo doll was causing it. She took it apart exactly had she had made it and burned it. If she had not done that. I would hate to see the rest.

The End
PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 5:47 pm


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.: My Little Tea Party :.


Did you ever here about the story of Salmone Smith, she is a little 8 year old girl, got taken into care a few years back, there was a story about her in the paper a few weeks back, it gave her police statement. Now what did it go like again...

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Mommy and Daddy where fighting again, as always they had been yelling a lot lately, I sit there in the darkness of my room listening to them, I am happy though because I have my little tea set, the cups are China and my guests are my teddy bears, how I love them.. Augh there goes another plate, dad sure has a temper on him, hes always smashing them, anyways as I was saying. My room is pink, I like the color pink it is ever so pretty it makes me feel like a Princess. Those two are still fighting, I want them to stop so bad... I leave my room opening the door to let the light shine into my dark little cage, there is a lot of screaming... and then there is no noise at all.

The next day is much better. I open the curtains and smiled, I looked around to see Mommy and Daddy there at my Table. They had black bags under there eyes, no surprise after how late they where up fighting they really have to learn how to take better care of themselves, I smiled and skipped over kissing daddy on the lips, his ginger beard was many shades lighter than his hair it looked odd but Daddy always had been.

After that I sat down on my chair and started to poor some tea into the cups, Mommy never let me use the kettle she always said I would hurt myself, but the tea was worm more red than brown, it was an exotic mix I told them from a far away land, like Spain remember that holiday it was so great! I laughed at the thought before I looked at them. My gaze soon came to Mommy she was always so pretty, her hair was usual straight and nice but today it was curly and knotted it looked nice to me I ran my fingers through it, it was sticky, it must be the new shampoo she was using, I looked at my hand it was dirty.. oh well kids will be kids.

Now that I look at them they both look like dolls, their faces white as snow, they had also lost a lot of weight both of them which looked so nice also their eyes big and wide, a little blood shot probably from the stress of the night before thank god they had come to there senses and stopped fighting. The thing I was happiest with the most was they where now eye level with me, when we where all sat on the chairs of my table, we where eye to eye of cause Mommy and Daddy needed to be rested on books but I did not mind helping them up onto them.

Another smile came onto my face as I went to the side and started to cut the cake, the Knife was still warm and wet from the night before, I can not be bothered going down to clean it I am having so much fun here, they will never know though I shall say it is strawberry jam. Mommy said I should not use knives but I think I have had more than enough practice not to hurt myself.

I drink my tea, and eat my cake, my secrete is to use fresh ingredients and put love into every drop. It was only an innocent little party and then the next thing I know I am here, I don't understand what I did wrong all I wanted to do was play.

... Their was a maid working at there home her name was Milly Cinder, she walked into Salmone's room to get her ready for school, she was greated with her masters heads on a pile of books, on a chair of there own, and a little Mistress drinking blood and eating the remains of the headless bodies. We bring children into this world with 'love in every drop' but remember they are not afraid to 'Drink us dry' now tell me....


Do you still want kids?


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Tebiki


Celeanor
Crew

Dangerous Hunter

PostPosted: Tue Oct 28, 2008 6:18 pm


Phantom


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Ghost stories are things to tell children so they feel the pump of adrenaline for the first time,

... and sleep soundly in the aftermath.



Ghost stories are for Boy Scouts and girl's sleepovers

... when someone's little brother wants to play a late night trick.




Ghost stories...

... are just fairy tales given a darker twist.




This is not a ghost story....




This is an abridged retelling of events and memories of both myself and those I care for, of a time when we thought the world had gone quite mad. The days had grown chilly prematurely, and the towers had fallen nay a scant few years earlier... children brought unimaginable toys to their schoolhouses and the news was alive with the sound of a state growing cold.



I repeat.. this is not a ghost story.




It is a glimpse of the path to the other side.


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We had flicked the television off casually, immune, as always, to the terror glamorized and popularized by the media teams we had grown to trust. The day had started well, we thought, high school was on it's way out, and university life was a shining beacon we migrated towards... appearing in hindsight like a pack of moths drawn to the flame. Scholarships had lined themselves up nicely for my best friend, and I was muddling my way apathetically through it all, disheartened by recent events... but trying bravely to put on the strong face everyone else was showing. The sleepover was uneventful, as we had lost those grand kahunas we had grown while plotting to TP my neighbor's car somewhere between gathering toilet paper and actually going out into the frigid air in nothing more then our skivvies. So breakfast was a cold cereal slathered in strawberry jelly prefaced with a night spent tucked in early with a distant memory of giggles, and the pair of us wandered towards the local city park after a round of the morning cartoons.

We were a fanciful duo, my friend and I, with Liza in her brightly hued blouse and jeans, and myself wearing the usual somber blacks and blues with the phrase "Art Is Resistance" bravely emblazoned across my bosom. Opposites in many ways, her mother was a practicing spiritual counselor and hypnotherapist, who's varied talents included those things mainstream culture often tagged 'occult' and 'obscene.' Silly really, since Elli is one of the most down to earth people I know, and a second mother in so many ways. My own mother is a school teacher, and likes to practice her school teacher habits at home, leaving little room for creativity and magic when there is reading and mathematics, funny that she was the one I found hard to reach, and often out of touch with the world. Liza feared little in the world, while I saw the teeth behind every smile, and wondered how many different ways a stranger could hurt me.

But this day, we were free, and with such optimism only two teenage girls can fully get in trouble with.. we set out to find something magical.



Ouija (pronounced Weegee.. or Weeja) boards have long been a fascination of people our age group, so it was probably no surprise to Liza's mom that we were interested in speaking with the dead. She perhaps knew better then most how upset I was over the loss of my beloved grandfather, and likely assumed our imaginations would take care of us...

She could not have foreseen the consequences of such desires...

...nor prepared us for the outcome.





We chose our spot nonchalantly, Liza didn't even bother to check if anyone could see us.. and the place just felt right to me, so I held back my usual cautious objections. The great ficus tree we planted ourselves beneath was a grand old gal, with the shallow roots of her kind spread long and far beneath us and the distant roads of the park bike path. Likely a survivor of the great Hurricane Andrew, since many of her central boughs were bent towards the west, as if burdened by an unseen wind. Yet the tree was peaceful despite her younger days, and the newer branches spread out in every direction to shade us from the fierce Florida sun.

The board we had was borrowed, one of Liza's other friends had used it in a failed conversion to satanism.. ominous enough.. if she hadn't assured me long before this trip that she had purified the board plenty and had had her mom take a look at it to be sure. Though Liza had stretched truths before, I doubted she'd have found something like lying to me about the purity of the board mischievous enough to be worth her time. After all, we had all heard the stories of girls being possessed by unclean boards, and of demons rising forth to a summons... and deciding not to go back. We were not after that kind of experience... I had confessed only a yearning to speak with my grandfather, to apologize for missing his funeral, and Liza, well she never needed a reason for much of anything. She had always had a good heart, which thankfully tempered her often reckless ways.

Spreading it out before us, I recall feeling nauseated as I looked down at the myriad letters and symbols... a distinct unease rose.. not from the board, but from the very ground beneath us, spiraling in towards the board.. as if in a giant vacuum. Liza's mom had called me an Empath, one gifted more then the average bear with the ability to sense and project the emotions of others, but I had not yet learned the finer aspects of such a gift, and regarded it merely as an extended sense... kind of like people with extraordinary sight or hearing. Liza was a self confessed Wiccan, and dabbled often in all sorts of arcane arts. She was uncanny with her predictions, but as was my usual, I viewed her eccentricity with thinly veiled skepticism. 'You haven't existed long enough to surprise me,' was often my motto, and my catholic upbringing often unconsciously stood in the way.

But now, as I watched her settle into a trance and even out her breathing, the nausea was replaced by a deep seated fear, one the curdled in the pit of my belly and threatened to moved upwards to my heart. Somehow, untrained and unaware, I knew this was wrong, that mortals had no business learning the truth before their due time... and that for two greenhorn explorers... the sea was about to get mighty rough.




Anticlimactically, nothing happened directly that day...

Despite all of our best efforts, the board had remained silent and our imaginations still. Not even a breeze picked up, and gradually, I relaxed as the nausea washed away, leaving only a slight tremble in my heart. We couldn't call my Grandpa, but given the terror so recently felt, I began to think things were best left as they were...


...But then things did happen...and a rather cliche series of unsettling events unfolded as a direct result of our 'failed' meddling. The day after, when we went back to visit the tree and laugh off our fears, we found the tree razed to the stump, with an orange flag designating it as diseased.. which.. to those who make a hobby of studying trees... is highly unusual. Ficus trees are naturally resilient, with their natural diseases taking many months to even show a sign, let alone one clear enough for a park ranger to take note of and order an extermination when the rangers were already stretched thin enough trying to eradicate citrus canker from our State's citrus groves. Surprisingly, Liza was the one who made the immediate connection, and we glanced at each other uneasily.

At length the decision was made to just go home and study for the SAT's, but on the way.. a stray dog began following us.. lured not by us, but by a presence the dog sensed, followed, and when we mistakenly tried to comfort it and offer food tidbits.. walked past us to sit nearby. Intently staring at the place next to me on the park bench, as if waiting for some command or offering. Unsettled and beginning to feel the same primordial fear as the previous day... I begged Liza to get out of here.

But Liza had more then one way to communicate with spirits, as I was soon to learn, and when she only looked at me with a blank expression, followed swiftly by a look of sheer joy... I felt nothing akin to pleasure at seeing my best friend so happy. The look wasn't Liza, she was wild, free, and seldom gave such base emotions a simple face like that. She wore her emotions around her like a shroud, and fairly vibrated with them...

This Liza was otherworldly, the joy she wore was not reflected on her face.. per se.. but was rather soul deep and cold. As if the soul was not used to the emotion, and found the living warmth of it missing... yet was too joyous to really care.

Then this strange not-Liza... well ... she called me Kathleen... my grandmother's name, and started crying.






I was torn at this point between fear for my friend, sheer anger at her stupidity for getting possessed... and thrilled that this HAD to be Grandpa. Everyone said I looked a lot like my grandmother in her younger years, especially when I wore make-up like I was that day, and Grandpa had died while I was still a young teen, not quite developed and ready to take on the world. Another small part of me had always thought Grandpa walked with me in Heaven, since he had always been a guiding influence in my life. And I found it to be not that far of a stretch to think that our Ouija boarding had attracted his attention. That was CERTAINLY something he would want to swat me for!

But something wasn't right, and as soon as I saw true recognition dawn and he said my name, the look faded, quickly replaced by a snarling visage I found horrifying. This was NOT Grandpa.. human.. yes, but not anyone kind or nurturing. Certainly nothing I had thought could possibly be following myself of Liza around out of curiosity or guardianship. This creature, no... man, was angry beyond belief, and he started rambling in a language I later discovered to be Greek... a language Liza had NEVER bothered with, let alone learned. Shaking and terrified, I called out to Liza, the real Liza, and reached forward to shake her shoulders despite the snarling words thrown at me.

And as soon as I touched her.. she was back.. vacant eyed, pale, and shivering, but her aura was all Liza.


This is a work of fiction, no ghosts were harmed in the making of this story.
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