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 Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 11:24 am
This is a piece of satirical poetry. Could possibly go in random? but it's not like it was free association, there was some active thought here.
*contains tiny bit of naughty language, o.m.g.*
and now, please enjoy:
"for god’s sake tell it like it is"
From a spidery thread
Glistening in the morning sun
Or the moon-sent sea of tears
A tiny droplet
Diamond dust in an eagle’s wing
Falls before my feet in a dismal walk
An avenue of grey flagstone
Under a red rowan dying in the autumn wind
Ah! That we were young again
As the fair rowan in her spring
That we might celebrate the advent
Of every gift of heaven,
Every drop of grace
Fallen as tears from the angels
And we might be whole once more.
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What a great load of
Wholly abstract
Semi-romantic
Mostly emo
Crock of
Bullshit
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Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 4:11 pm
This could go in 'Funny' because it is satire, or put it in random.
Let me know and I'll move it there.
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8_I_-_Like_-_Trash_8 Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 12:04 pm
the only problem is there isn't a specific funny section that i can find. but i guess it could go in random..... or timeless, lols, because we all know that this poem will go down in history like the freaking iliad. biggrin
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Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 2:32 pm
Ah, yes, I've felt that way many a time while reading someone else's poetry. I enjoy poetry of a more cheerful nature, actually.
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